Well I Read the 1st bar And decided that the text was a lil too small so I quit

thanks for the feedback stanza ! not!

Don't try to take my storytellin title :cussing:

This my turf Nigga.

Yo textcee bob......dont freepost like that u ruinin a good OM

yo and murdz i know we had our beef but this was hot man.......give props where props due......i swear if i hadnt known this was from you I would guess it was from some Eminem or crazy shit like that........mad flows and this was sick.....i read it all...long read lol but it was sick......yo man RTF...link in sig.....pzzzzz

Intermental forget the beef man we cool now aiight like fam :thumbup: im droppin all beef...
1ndeph whats wrong? lol im not takin ur turf, freindly comp :thumbup:

Aiite murdz we kool......RTF link in sig......peace famm

yeah done.......

Nice piece sweetie, you should definitely put this on audio :thumbup:

Flow's mad nice, like how the story developed and how you built it up towards the ending (which I was feeling). You went into detail which kept readers focussed despite the length of it, emotion was nice and imagery was there for sure. Like watching a movie or whatever play in front of your eyes. Good one!

thanks DQ i wanna buy u... :(

Lol I was playin with you

hahah i kno.. chill dawg.. :thumbup:

uppin any more feed please...

bumpppppppppppppppppppppppppp

nice shit here it reminds me of my "BackStaber" freestyles

nice vocab mulites crazy flow real good the last line dope as hell dawg 8.5/10

please return the favor in one of my "View My Vission" open mic links in my sig

yeah dawg i will, just doin sumthin real quick.....