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Voted For: Affliction

like un-seen paint-cans drop from roof top building,
i'll fuck u'r day up w/ an on-top hit that'll crack ya frame like show'in a naked pic to ya moms about her gay children.... 1
nah
raps my addiction... battles skills u have are all fiction
my bitches i'll chop ya penius off.. then blame her A_dick_tion....(adiction) 2
decent
ya need to build up ya skills or get filled up with steel,
that'll drive a hole deeper in ya then oil-drills,
plus u'r erotic hit feels, like a preteen massage'in tits befor Da blow-up-doll-fill's....3
hate 3rhymed lines.. but this one was weak
u'r fake spits, make shit, look like ya saliva came from a crayola-paint-set,
ya verse almost had me like a precher who seen a saint scrips ready to Faint-quick 4
aight
rip ya face with a blade N toss aicd till ya skin fade-away,
only reason u'll be here longer, cuz he stuck on the net serchin for hes flow-like-tidle-wave
nope


Your a fucking joke, like your name you just a con
He all talk but no action, when it goes down
.................................................I n panties he runs
decent
My punches will make you bleed, so the bull wont duck you
Kid wants to battle jack the ripper, cause his
...........................................Hormone s was going crazy dude
nope
If you had your alias name, you still wouldnt see sickness
and if you win this battle, it only mean you in the
.................................................. .....Prostitution business
okay
Look at his OM you can tell his punches arent tight
Brush your teeth barbie tooth paste is the only time you spit nice
punch was weak
Since you aint on your alias name no more, your punches is not in effect
Your punches dont connect like a broke 1-800 collect
decent

Kon.. make your punches harder than that..
make your structure.. sorta like Affliction’s here..
& add some personas in ur rhymes.. so u’ll win
easier w/ the hard-punches..

Affliction.. make ur punches harder than that also
cuz ur shit was wack.. add more personas than that
w/ no links in ur rhymes too..

both need to elevate more..

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Voted For: Kon

I felt oyu had alot more an better punches tht landed...You had some facts in there. Keep it up...
Rtf to my battle sig vs conflict. much appreciated.

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Voted For: Affliction

Your a fucking joke, like your name you just a con
He all talk but no action, when it goes down
.................................................I n panties he runs
^^didn't rhyme....3/10
My punches will make you bleed, so the bull wont duck you
Kid wants to battle jack the ripper, cause his
...........................................Hormone s was going crazy dude
^^OK...coulda been better....5/10
If you had your alias name, you still wouldnt see sickness
and if you win this battle, it only mean you in the
.................................................. .....Prostitution business
^^HMM...ok.....6/10
Look at his OM you can tell his punches arent tight
Brush your teeth barbie tooth paste is the only time you spit nice
^^the 1st line was nice..but 2nd wasn't...4/10
Since you aint on your alias name no more, your punches is not in effect
Your punches dont connect like a broke 1-800 collect
^^???????????....4/10

Ok..a bunch of mediocre punches here.Structure was good.Flow was off as u didn't rhyme some parts and had a lil too much filler.Ur personals coulda hit better.Like the Jack the Ripper one.Some lines were played like the spit nice and 1800-Collect,

like un-seen paint-cans drop from roof top building,
i'll fuck u'r day up w/ an on-top hit that'll crack ya frame like show'in a naked pic to ya moms about her gay children.... 1
^^Horrible....2/10
raps my addiction... battles skills u have are all fiction
my bitches i'll chop ya penius off.. then blame her A_dick_tion....(adiction) 2
^^No...awful wordplay..1/10
ya need to build up ya skills or get filled up with steel,
that'll drive a hole deeper in ya then oil-drills,
plus u'r erotic hit feels, like a preteen massage'in tits befor Da blow-up-doll-fill's....3
^^zzzzzzzzzzzzz...1/10
u'r fake spits, make shit, look like ya saliva came from a crayola-paint-set,
ya verse almost had me like a precher who seen a saint scrips ready to Faint-quick 4
^^Wtf?...2/10rip ya face with a blade N toss aicd till ya skin fade-away,
only reason u'll be here longer, cuz he stuck on the net serchin for hes flow-like-tidle-wave 5
^^NO...1/10


Man...horrible.first..stop with the weird structure..type ya verse normal.2nd..stop saying shit just because they rhyme.That'd get you nowhere.And where are your personal?I saw some wordplay..but it was embarrasing.

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heard you talk alot of shit so I had to check your stuff.

your not as good as you try to soundlike kid.