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Voted For: Tekneek

Your first bar whored his whole verse, his is easy...
tek gets it dueto using mad multis and havin better punches although a couple of played concepts were used.

Mav, yours was just weak son, elevate.

will ex. more if needed.
no hate
rtf

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Voted For: Tekneek

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Voted For: Tekneek

Maverick
Yo...
Man u aint Memphis bleek U aint got no "tekneek"
U shouldnt have excepted shulda turned ya cheek
Bad wordplay and bad wording of punch
this is a blowout not a battle war pussy raps on his keyboard
like starwars ur punchlines couldnt hit even if u had a longsword
Dissed yourself, bad similie to stars wars.
"Tekneek" humph after this battle ill leave u none
i dont have to use guns my words will leave u sonned
Self glorification and the wordplay wasn't even there.
ya rap "Tekneek" will have u on the corner like a bum
peaceful ass nun tryna cop my style cuz urs aint ill
Bad similie with self glorification again.
ya lines put me to sleep like big bottles of benedryl
U owe me my time back so ima leave u wit $100 bill
Decent idea, bad wording.

Overall, this verse sucked. Punches and personals were worded horribly and most of this verse was self glorification. You need to work on real punches and personals. Wordplay wasn't that creative either. Tried to get too much from his name. I didn't like anything from your verse.

Tekneek
Yo... I'm back-in-the-place cuz rap-is-my-fate, i spit 'heat' like a 'gat-in-the-waist'... u wack, only time i'll 'feel ya spit' is if u 'spat-in-my-face'...
First off, work on your structure. Decent punch. Kind of dissed yourself, but ya.
He only 'run tracks-in-a-race', make this nigga feel 'insecure' cuz i'm 'crackin-his-safe'... ya see grim, but all I see is ‘pussy’ like my girl ‘sat-on-my-face’…
Forcing multis in here. Flow is off. Bad punch
But fuck it i'm crackin-his-face n snatchin-his-cake, i'm packin so don't get boddied-clown... cuz i ‘crack-headz’ like 'Whitney Houston n Bobby-Brown'...
Self glorification and forced multis.
no vocab, only time he use 'big words' is when his 'font-is-large'... here’s a ‘personal’ i fucked ya sister n ya girl in ya moms-garage...
Doing good till the end. Fake personal. booooo
my flow is perpetual, intellectual, bars 'harder' than 'the correctional'... u a rookie i'm a professional, make this 'pussy bleed' like he on his 'menstrual'!!!
Played punch.

Overall, don't force your multis so much. Your flow is really choppy and your punches suffer because of it.

I vote for Tekneek for some punches and a personal or two.

v-Tekneek