It's already at the top, but I feel like upping again so I can feel cool!!

lmao yeah ill do the same.. yo man lol usually id be pissed at loosin but i dont mind loosin cause i knew ud beat me gud battle yo....

Lol. It's all good yo.

If ever want to collab or something get at me..

Word.

Voted For: Murdz

Mimesis - ur opener was creative but kinda weak..ur next bar was nice..good personal..the lil cali line..didnt really hit hard..but it was still an ok personal..ur last 2 barz werent very good..ur closer was pretty weak..overall i think ur verse was decent..i had a good flow..it didnt seem like anything was forced..i expected u to come harder in ur verse.....6/10




Murdz - now ur verse was really strange..ur multis seemed forced..ur first line was dumb..well ur whole opener was weak..but after that u did well..i think i liked ur slim to nun bar the best..good stuff..the one thing ur verse lacked was personals..the only thing u had about him was when u said Mimesis beating murdz?..thats it..woulda liked to see more personals..ok closer..overall i think u need to stop using the multis cause they make ur lines streched.....8/10




Murdz wins

I don't get how you only say one positive thing about his verse in your breakdown, but give him an 8/10 :confused:

S'all good though.

1-1 Uppin.

woah.. lol yeah man ima have to hold back on ma multies.. uppin yo..

his wordplay was a lot better than yours..and even though some of his punches didnt hit really hard they were enough to beat urs..the only good line i think u had was the draft pick line..everything else wasnt really creative and didnt hit very hard..tryin to clarify this so it doesnt seem like im hatin on Mimesis

Nah, I wasn't taking it as hate.

I'm just trying to get back into the swing of things, battle wise, so I just wanted to know why you thought I lost.

It's all good yo.

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

Mimesis took this one...

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

Polls..yeup...

Dope drop...

The Establishment is wicked like woah..

Word to 2 votes and like, 6 people peeping polls.

:wtf:

Voted For: Mimesis

I'm Depleting ya Frame,Don't mean problems with Stationary when I say my Ink-will-Run
And the Battle's like Shady and Christian Women, Ya chance of Winning is Slim-to-Nun
this bitch ain't Gangsta, Question if i Carry-Tools, Not aware that I Bury-Fools
Mimesis Beating murdz? No Way 'You are not A-Loud' Just like 'Following Library-Rules"
^^^liked this shit... good creativity and all but the whole concept of "your ganna lose" is beyond played and is selfglorifying

mim-
Why admit that I'll win??... at least you know your gettin ripped in two
Cause we're not agitated farmers.. but nobody wants to listen to Mu
^^feelin and a decently unplayed concept
You have no skill son.. custom title admitting that your run down
Faggots only a Draft Pick because I'm dropping Murdz in one round
^^^ also good concept and good wordplay

out of your verses u had equal lines i liked but outta those i liked mims better... cuz they was less played concepts and also not selfglorifying

battle links in sig return honest votes please.

Thanks for the vote.

2-1 Me.

Upping for more..

Voted For: Murdz

explanation

Mimesis
Nobodys reading your shit.. Still plan to win with ur spit hittin the deck?
Even though,
He already told me I was going to be leaving.. with a win on my rec
Niec Starter
Why admit that I'll win??... at least you know your gettin ripped in two
Cause we're not agitated farmers.. but nobody wants to listen to Mu
oHH oK i sEE tHE NaME pLAY lol dINT sE iT aT fIRST
You have no skill son.. custom title admitting that your run down
Faggots only a Draft Pick because I'm dropping Murdz in one round
LOL Funny ..>Decent BuT funny
Having fun now?.. I'm never passed as wack.. They're givin you a rally
Cause it speaks for itself when everybody thought you were Lil Cali
..:shocked: Im < Of course as you can see
I thought I had a challenge.. but Murdz is just another dropped queer
Cause you threw a story in Peer Counselor..
..I'll just throw you off the peer
....Sloppy..
Nobody fears you.. Normally I tip my hat, but shit, you cant rap kid
I'll just give you mine so you can finally see what's like to cap wins
...LOl Nice ender..

Overall i Think That You couldve/ shouldve done better considering your talents i Think That You lacked off on Murdz But I think That Murdz Takes this battle although very close I Think that You Should never let your gaurds down I dont care who you battling always be ready Ya Heard?

Murdz
My Blurted-Spits, Immerse-ya-Bitch, In an Earth-Filled-Ditch while I Traverse-the-Pit
Adversely-Sick, I Coerce-this-Kid, To Disperse-his-Wig when his Nerves-go-Twitch
....Nice Multi's Although The Punch wasnt very Effective..
Ya Personals Arent ‘Makin-Contact’ Like Retired ‘Baseball Vets’, You Aint-Hittin
Mayne-Listen…ill Snatch Ya ‘Necklace’, Brain-Twitchin Now Cuz Ya Chain-Missin!!! *
...LOL That Was Nice I Liked That...
Mimesis ? My Storm Swarms ya World, Beat you over the Head with Broken-Boards
Snatch ya Spits Straight From-ya-Throat and Choke ya with your Own-Vocal-Chords
/.....Nice Multis but as before The Attempted punch wasnt very effective
I'm Depleting ya Frame,Don't mean problems with Stationary when I say my Ink-will-Run
And the Battle's like Shady and Christian Women, Ya chance of Winning is Slim-to-Nun
......Ok Wordplay couldve be stated better....
this bitch ain't Gangsta, Question if i Carry-Tools, Not aware that I Bury-Fools
Mimesis Beating murdz? No Way 'You are not A-Loud' Just like 'Following Library-Rules"
.....LOl That Was It Man i Like That...
face it Mimesis You Nervous-Kid Jus A Worthless-Bitch Tryna To Get Into Sum Circuit-Shit
Spittin That Hurtful-Shit And Notice you Couldn’t Have A ‘Hot Hand’ Witta Thermal-Grip!!!
....Nice wordplay ...
Overall I Think That You Focus to much on multis and stuff but when you throw a punch the shit is deadly man Nice stuff I think That although I respect Mim I Think That You take this battle man Really

HOT ASS BATTLE DEF WORTHE READING

RTF In any battle link in my Sig Or Mim Can Pay me a mill and Murdz RTF

Lmao. This is a lot closer then I expected it to be.

Whatever.