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Lmao. Just kidding, Madrapper.

shit was funny and cats below average and can't write punchlines

Quote:

Originally Posted by sabotage

look...its not all about vocab.....this isnt an english class.....

...okay ya verse here seriously wasnt that good..ur verse flowed well and everything was even but you really didnt have any punchlines..punches are meant to hit the opponent hard and none of those lines did that..yeah ur ok with the multis but if u title ur verse "punchlines to sabotage" then come out with punchlines..

thats real feedback.......

seemed like a long run on sentence to me...
i mean you can ryhme but the punches needed some
refinement n rewording to be considered punches
maddrapper...is this supposed to be audio...or are you text?
what gives..? cuz alot of what you put in there wasnt
relative to the entirety of your bars n verse as a whole...

thank you..someone agrees with me..

damn bitch u realli do suck, im glad to be the president of the MADDRAPPER IS WACK ASSOCIATION, it will get alot of support..

LOL.....I agree with Murdz and im provin it right now im whoopin tht bitch 3-0 in battles rite now

the only thing being proved is that these cats are below average and use played out punchlines and not on my level they can really use some maddrapper's classroom work right not they can't write punchlines the least bit WELL ANYWAY THANKS FOR RESPONDING AND TAKE NOTES PLEASE TIRED OF READING THE PLAYED OUT BELOW AVERAGE GARBAGE YALL WRITE)