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B.I.G. 06-19-05 10:09 PM

aight.... don't worry.. pc out................................

Implicit 06-19-05 10:54 PM

Voted For: SNE DAWG

this was an ok battle

SNE Dawg - ur verse was alright..u tried some wordplay but it didnt work too well..ur punches?..not really..ur best line in ur verse was about sending back every bark he sends..the weedman line was kinda weak..but u did ur thing.....7/10




Ax Dogg - u had an alright verse..it flowed well..u didnt ret to strech ur lines too much..u had a few multis..u didnt really have any punches in there that i thought were very good..u did ok..nothing really special..u should check out the punchline cypher to get a better idea of a punch and to help you out.....5/10




SNE Dawg wins

please return the favor

BiZzO 06-20-05 05:02 AM

This was feedback posted for SNE DAWG
 
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SNE DAWG 06-20-05 10:53 PM

...............uppin.............................. ...

Pollo Deshuesado 06-21-05 12:12 AM

Voted For: Ax Dogg

before I vote I want to get clear that this ain't a hate vote, and I know he gonna say it becouse he bit my lines and I told the site admin.

vote = Ax
first off
the flow was ok in both verses, structure was fucked up from Sne, punchlines were stupid from both verses... The only good personals were like 3 (2 Ax and 1 Sne)
the point of Sne's battle was that he bit lines from Babble.On writin em diferently, but ok... they were good, the multi's were tight only on Ax's battle, Nameplay was a tie definetly, as well as creativity.
Ax 8 out of ten and sne 7 out ten, good battle

this was a honest, no hate vote... so don't talk shit man, am tellin you this as an RV voter.

Control Freq 06-21-05 02:50 AM

Voted For: Ax Dogg

Diet Coke.............................................. ...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

B.I.G. 06-21-05 12:28 PM

^^^^^^ wtf?.......................................

SNE DAWG 06-22-05 03:19 PM

who the fuck is control freq????..................

B. Magik 06-22-05 04:18 PM

This was feedback posted for SNE DAWG
 
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Black City 06-23-05 09:37 AM

Voted For: Ax Dogg

dis vote is goin to Ax 4sho...only because his punches hit harder...however, both of yall verses were a bit on tha ass side

open: tie: dont know who could get dis one...both of em wasnt good
close: Ax: damn kid, ya multis was fiya fareal...nice one
personals: Ax: i guess u get it cuz tha otha verse had none
metas: Ax: was more creative than SNE
punches: Ax: yeah, i told u dat
multis: SNE: multis was sick, but dats bout it...step ya battle game up

win: Ax Dogg gets my vote...dont like it, sue me for all my RV money

B.I.G. 06-23-05 01:06 PM

^^^^^thanx.. peace................. uppin........................

B.I.G. 06-23-05 02:34 PM

.............uppin................................ ..........

B.I.G. 06-26-05 03:04 PM

Quote:
this nigga is jealus cause am winnin


let me ask you sumthing..... who is winnin on here???

your only vote should be deleted cuz its a hate vote but I don't know eith who you went n cried so it wasn't deleted...


oh... and by the way: jealus is spelled jealous.....

B.I.G. 06-28-05 02:22 PM

............................uppin................. ................

Bizarre 06-28-05 02:28 PM

....ax fraud....battle me....Pusyy coke licker....


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