yo dogg i aint got AIM and also homie.....im with RAW....but thanks for the offer

shit was hot homie....kind of short for a song though, but it flowed well, rhymes was tight, chorus was decent....Id say about 7.5/10 for what you had


Please RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194203

Yo J, thanks ill RTF...but i wanna put this in audio....i want the feel to be a slow ryhthym....can u try make me a beat

^^ you goin to repeat the chorus 2X or just once? and how slow you talkin? you want piano's and stuff or just a slow grimy beat?

piano's, the chorus will be repeated twice at the end and thts it holla at me