ax...stop bitchin...and battle me...u set it up...

Voted For: Tekneek


Tekneek-I can't evne break ur verse down line by line because ur structure was horrible.It was line you put it in 3 verses.The 1st and 2nd one had 0 punches.The last one actually looked like it was trying to diss.But it was still whack.

Slik Flo-U structure ur verse better than the other guy.Flow was the same.U had too much glorifying in ur shit shich is shy I think you lost.U need to focus on dissin and that alone.

Vote-Tekneek(please vote in link below or I'll have to dq this vote)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901

Voted For: slik flo

slik flo - You had a good flow, some pretty good attempts at punches.

Best Line - all yo threads been bout bitch slappin
like i said wen i win...every body's gonna be clappin

Worst Line - yo biography says you aint black
you sure you weren't high on crack?...

Tekneek - iight spit, the flow was off, but you had some good multi's and iight punches.

Best Line - LOL, im kicking his ass with ma size 9 nike airs..........wid the rhyming skillz he pocess'es............he really is a ghetto's nightmare...(peep his sig)

Worst Line - cation .........penis in his butt .........now thatz a true flames brink of-sen-sation .. ..........only way he can get off iz by use'n a d.ildo for-pen-atration ...

OVERALL - This battle was a close one, no one came that strong, but I think that flo tried to use punches and tek, you just wanted to rhyme semi-big words. Tek you should have tried to use stronger punches. N0 Hate.

Vote - slik flo

Return The Fav(or vote be DQ'd)
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=195863

Aight No Bother..........
3-1
Uppin

upping this bitch yet again............................................. ................

uppin this............................................

upping this miother fucker.........................
lets get these votes in guys.

WE still need more votes people...................

Voted For: Tekneek

ok this was a pretty gud battle, lets get into it!

Tek - your verse was gud, punches hit hard, your verse flowed well, neither of you two had personals, the vocabulary in your verses needs to be extended on a bit, overall you had a gud verse, i didnt like the structure that much, but werd, your punches hit hard when they needed to.. wordplay was iight... gud verse..

slik - your verse was very genralised, the flow was iight, punches didnt hit as hard as teks, there was no personals, wordplay wasnt realli there, structure was aiight, but i have to give this battle to tek for more consistant flow and punches!

vote / tek

Voted For: Tekneek

slik flo - ur shit was WAAAAY to basic........ur punches weren't hard hitting everything was really simple rhyme scheme....you need to add wordplay too.....get some personals goin.....but u can improve....jus helpin ya out

Tekneek - usually i dont like structures like that but i did like this one....you had good punches and a couple personals....multies were there and your vocab was pretty nice...keep spittin.....

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