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K-Trini 06-22-05 11:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Wicked One
This was a nice piece n all....had some emotion...Vocab was good and had some good rhyme scheme...Structure could have been better but it was aight....but overall..9.2/10...Keep up tha good work girl....

* OH And K-Trini << Fuck outta here bitch...Givin shitty ass advice to...dumbass..



Man.....fuck you....I gave da best feedback in this shit.U tellin her da same thing everyone else is:

"Ooh,my goodNess,So EmotioNal!!!!!,I Love you Black Queen!!!!!"

Damn....if anything....you pussy riders need to get the fuck outta here.I know one thing for sure....(even though she wouldn't say it due to beef I got with her crew)next time Black Queen writes....my advice will be the most helpful.

And when 2 of my battles close I wanna battle Wall Street and you bitch for sayin I gave shitty advice.

Christianite 06-23-05 12:03 AM

This was good, a real good read, the vocab was good, structure as well, topic kinda unique, good job keep it up


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