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for fucks sake dawg.. vote up on this yalll dont be bitch ass nuggaz!
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Voted For: .Murdz.
HAHAHA at the last line murdz......he took this easy..no need to break down... Murdz: Good sturcture, good worldplay and multies.....I dont see many multies in battles that work but this here did work and very good job....also good punches best line: you think you the greatest?...nigga you aint quite foolin me My verses are so good ya family hired me to write ya eulogie!!! SNE Dawg: Your verse lacked hard punches, it had self glorification and it was weak, not feelin it atall dawg, elevate loads in battles...~RTF LINK IN SIG~ |
thanks yo.... uppin dizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Voted For: .Murdz.
SNE DAWG- Not much complexity that softshade line wasnt bad though, but a majority of your lines were played and flow was pretty average Murdz- the miget line made me laugh, I've seen ya do better multi's were ill, your had more inteligent consepts than dawg so Imma have to give this to you |
thanks yo... uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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upppin disssssssssss yoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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Nigga u straight up merked homeboy this should be a K.O. naw mean I K.o.ed em awhile back....all i gotta really say is G'luck with hurrying up and getting votes for this battle so it will be closed...uppin dis one for my fam
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thanks home boi..
uppin thisssssssss comeonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn |
uppin thisssssssssss comeon yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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Voted For: .Murdz.
Aii This Is What I Think Flow- Murdz Def had the best flow in this battle his structure was also Very neat and he kept his syllables even so i Can give him my vote in that area Punchez- Murdz Takes this hands down his supplied more of an original Verse with punchez he also came with a more Wordplayed verse So He gets My vote in that area to Personal- Aii This IS Very easy Murdz supplied basically the only personal That was Good in this battle And that was the One when he played of the Thing in his sig So He takes that also with much ease Vocab- Noone really used any big vocab but murdz used some Aii words so v/murdz Multies- Murdz he showed good multies in The first line Not all dat good multies but the only multies in this battle so my v/ murdz Originality- Murdz And thats because He didnt come with any played Lines punchez or any Fake personals So he get my v in that too Overal my v/ goes to MURDZ Nice Battle RTf In any battle link in my sig |
One Sided Battle................ LOL..................
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lol werd..... BUMP BUMP BUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin this comeone one more vote needed and then its shut!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: .Murdz.
Right this was a good battle. there were decent battles comin from both of you but murdz really shone in this battle.his punches were hittin harder and all aspects of his verse were nice. there was better wordplay in murdz's verse and his personals were a whole lot funnier especially the one about SNE's name bein taken from a disease. i thought that shit was funy as hell. he also had superior vocab in his verse. don't get me wrong i thought SNE's verse was a nice verse, i just felt that murdz came stronger in his one |
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