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BiZzO 06-25-05 07:54 AM

for fucks sake dawg.. vote up on this yalll dont be bitch ass nuggaz!

PrahJect 06-25-05 08:40 PM

Voted For: .Murdz.

HAHAHA at the last line murdz......he took this easy..no need to break down...

Murdz: Good sturcture, good worldplay and multies.....I dont see many multies in battles that work but this here did work and very good job....also good punches

best line:

you think you the greatest?...nigga you aint quite foolin me
My verses are so good ya family hired me to write ya eulogie!!!

SNE Dawg:

Your verse lacked hard punches, it had self glorification and it was weak, not feelin it atall dawg, elevate loads in battles...~RTF LINK IN SIG~

BiZzO 06-25-05 08:42 PM

thanks yo.... uppin dizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

MC Virtuoso 06-26-05 08:07 AM

Voted For: .Murdz.

SNE DAWG- Not much complexity that softshade line wasnt bad though, but a majority of your lines were played and flow was pretty average

Murdz- the miget line made me laugh, I've seen ya do better multi's were ill, your had more inteligent consepts than dawg so Imma have to give this to you

BiZzO 06-26-05 08:17 AM

thanks yo... uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

BiZzO 06-26-05 09:04 PM

upppin disssssssssss yoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Chris Stylez 06-27-05 12:47 AM

This was feedback posted for .Murdz.
 
Nigga u straight up merked homeboy this should be a K.O. naw mean I K.o.ed em awhile back....all i gotta really say is G'luck with hurrying up and getting votes for this battle so it will be closed...uppin dis one for my fam

BiZzO 06-27-05 03:53 AM

thanks home boi..
uppin thisssssssss comeonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

BiZzO 06-27-05 11:57 PM

uppin thisssssssssss comeon yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Stanza 06-28-05 12:05 AM

Voted For: .Murdz.

Aii This Is What I Think

Flow- Murdz Def had the best flow in this battle his structure was also Very neat and he kept his syllables even so i Can give him my vote in that area

Punchez- Murdz Takes this hands down his supplied more of an original Verse with punchez he also came with a more Wordplayed verse So He gets My vote in that area to

Personal- Aii This IS Very easy Murdz supplied basically the only personal That was Good in this battle And that was the One when he played of the Thing in his sig So He takes that also with much ease

Vocab- Noone really used any big vocab but murdz used some Aii words so v/murdz

Multies- Murdz he showed good multies in The first line Not all dat good multies but the only multies in this battle so my v/ murdz

Originality- Murdz And thats because He didnt come with any played Lines punchez or any Fake personals So he get my v in that too

Overal my v/ goes to MURDZ

Nice Battle

RTf In any battle link in my sig

B.I.G. 06-28-05 02:15 PM

One Sided Battle................ LOL..................

BiZzO 06-28-05 10:33 PM

lol werd..... BUMP BUMP BUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BiZzO 06-29-05 04:21 AM

uppin this comeone one more vote needed and then its shut!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WhoAmI 06-29-05 07:16 PM

Voted For: .Murdz.

Right this was a good battle. there were decent battles comin from both of you but murdz really shone in this battle.his punches were hittin harder and all aspects of his verse were nice. there was better wordplay in murdz's verse and his personals were a whole lot funnier especially the one about SNE's name bein taken from a disease. i thought that shit was funy as hell. he also had superior vocab in his verse.
don't get me wrong i thought SNE's verse was a nice verse, i just felt that murdz came stronger in his one


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