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I voted for K-trini cause his verse was more complex and his punches was creative like this one for example

Fantasizin so much,U purposely spit whack to stay "under" an emcee/
Daubs couldn't regularly rhymth to the beat, if he swallowed an artery/

this 2 bars are better than DAUBS whole verse IMO

this was a good line by daubs but it was not enough

My raps are like tight knots, by you they wont become undone..
Battlin me again, its like restartin chess games .......................
.........................................You end up back to square one!!

so thats why i voted for trini but both of ya stay up.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

This was feedback posted for Daubs

checkin pollz......................................

uppin...........................................

This was feedback posted for Daubs

this was off the hook however it would be better with multi's this wasn't bad at all

Quote:

Originally Posted by K-Trini

[QUOTE=E.C]Voted For: Daubs

ight this was a close battle... u have elevated madly k-trini good job man... daubs you didn't come as hard as i was expecting.

k-trini:

Fantasizin so much,U purposely spit whack to stay "under" an emcee/
Daubs couldn't regularly rhymth to the beat, if he swallowed an artery/
^^ umm was this a forced rhyme? i dont get the punch here really
Another victim,..I'll squash you like "ten-ants",think I ain't chargin rent?'/
11 wins....luckyness is why,Way U bIte shit U outta sink,like a "row-dent"/
^^ lol this was dope, nice concept and hard hitting
MeaSurin in tErmz a whackness,I'm positive ya deeply set in the gallons/
Chatin on the nEt while standing on oNe fOot still leaves ya "IM-balanced"/
^^ lol this was ok i spose good closure

u have elevated alot man well done on this.. you had soenm decent punches in there but there was one punch that i didnt really get but it aint nothing u had a strong verse, was a lil bit on the stretched side but it wasn't too bad... good job :thumbup:

Wtf?man....I explained shit at the end........an artery conatins pulse which conatins rhythm.So fuckin stupuid.It's shit like this that pisses me off.

you really are as thick as you look you can only see your verse untill i have voted on it, then i can see the explanations so its like that u cant post your verse and then explain it in another post it doesn't work like that..

Voted For: Daubs

IP: 9419 3D1C - not any more :D

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punches - D
persnals - D
Flow - D
metals - none
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this battle was nice D came good liked some of the punches K u didnt fcome hard punches were pretty weak flow was not there didnt like ur verse so D gts my vote

D - return vote on my battle in sig - bottom picture (lnks)

This was feedback posted for Daubs

nice famz u got him.................................

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Voted For: Daubs

VOte: Daubs

K trini- u gotta up your creativity, u need to come op with more original hard hitting punches, your structure was fine and ur shit flowed well, but u just didnt really damage daubs wid any of ur line..ur attempts at "wordplay" were well wack, at least ur trying though, basically u need personals n berrer punches...1

Daubs: some okay wordplay the shiz bout ropes was kinda played, ur line bout council tax was kinda funny, some elements of humour in drop, ur structure n flow was fine, u basically won with hard hitting n more creatine punches n personals...

Peace