Voted For: OneStepBeyond

K-Trini not good enough

Goin oN one kNee for a dEad body iS only wAy ya fiNd yA "soul mAte"/
YOu stay sO deep inSide ya friEnds,you sMell wat yA own "paL-ate"/ (8/10 i like that line)

Sides maKin any moRe,worse thiNg you cAn do To ur verSe is subMit/ (alright line 5/10)

MoNey wouldn't "fLy" in yoUr pockets iF ya boXers were maDe a magNets/ (nice enough 7/10)

Turn ya sO self conScious,it'd be impOssible to evEn try to reBound/ (4/10 average)
BuRyin urself iN a gaRden still wouLdn't ripen yOu undeRground/ (good I think 7/10)

VerSes might Be decent.................................
if it waSn't bit,prEwrit,and laCked wit/
HolDin your alBum left a stAin on mY palm,duE to My grAsp on sHit/ (to long but nice idea 5/10)

All you Do to rAp is coRRupt,with ur inAbility to sPit abrUpt/ (4/10 u just trowen words together there to ryhme)

& It not mY fault tHe only thIng you sLeep with pEe's staNding up/ (??? dont understand tht line il give it a 2/10 not a great finishing line man! also it was kinda hard to read ur writing with "tHis cRaP" stick to normal caps.

OneStepBeyond

You're cocky acting has got me laughing... and I dick ride? 7/10
Are you 'sure/shore'? See this so-called truth begins to 'riptide', 8/10 original i think
Ya speaking senselessly... Mention me and prepare for the worst, 4/10
Think you runnin away with the win, you need to carry it first, 4/10
I'm so tired, your flows fire? Well I'll be dismissing your bars, 6/10
Ya got an ego, your heads exceded the roof, like flipping in cars, 7.5/10
I'm sure you got dope ryhmes but you're way to dumb to share it, 4/10
When I 'drop' I 'damage ya brain' like babies with clumsy parents, 9/10 my fav lin of the battle
This herbish hoecake's verse is so fake, K's gotten so dead soft, 7/10
Closest you'll come to 'defeatin' me is choppin my legs off.. 6/10 not a great finisher either, not a great battle here i dont think

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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

nice shyt OSB im checkin pollz!!!...................

uppin.............................................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

flow: onestep
punches: onestep by a hair...
creativeness: k-trini

vote: onestep just edge this out with more consistent punches i thought that was easyer to follow due to a better flow......

preety close battle hella good read from both keep it up tight one here....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196136

returnt he favor or i will have my vote REMOVED.........

and if my vote needs to be better explain pm me to........

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

ok both had potential but woah!!! ktrini u need alot of work 4real not tryin to be rude though u didnt have at all a structure man u need to work at that and u need alot of work on ya flow and skill on punches u did have wordplay though

OSB ok u had a good structure and flow nice punches and not alot of wordplay but u backed it alot wit ur punches and both also do need to work on vocab aight but my v// goes to OSB

uppin.............................................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

both were weak but K-Trini was horrible

My vote: OneStepBeyond