Voted For: K-Trini
My goodness , wat I doin?, battlin a nine yr. old kid?/ "Gong" could hold a "show",but nodody' d eva go to it/ ^^^^tight opener Ur a tourist to this shit,So take ya beatin as a sovereign/ You get really raptorous when you hear men are near/ ^^^^^creative Im the white blood cells a dis bitch,killin for vital cause/ Gong dun flow,like blood in vaginas after menopause/ ^^^^^tight vocab Seems ya got nutin better to do,but put urself in ya sig./ Savein the youth,"SO SAY NO TO DOPE KID,YA DIG?????/ ^^^^no, didn't felt that one, anyway a tight closin Overall: good verse, good flow, structure and vocab tight punchlines but no personals Go ahead, mention cock to this little phone sex fanatic And he'll be on the line longer than cocaine addicts! ^^^^tight opener Now i'm not an advocate for bad habits but shit happens Like just last week I saw Trini's girl leave him for... *Points to the O.Gs* ................ Pure Knowledge. ^^^^^ good personal but you fucked up ur structure You couldn't burn faggots with newspaper and matches The only clips you bustin are on ............................................Email attachments. ^^^^^wtf?? didn't felt that one Spirograph's my passion so I got you in a stencil... And yeah you reload lead... In my mechanical pencil! ^^^^good one, creative Get vocal in your sig, you're too antisocial for my innuendos This kid 'DucKHunt' like he's at home playin super nintendo! ^^^^ that has no sence... but good punchline anyway Overall: you fucked up your structure and your flow, the personal was weak and the punchline too, but you need to quit them non sences and improve ur vocab V/ K-trini RTF battles on my sig |
Duck Cunt... bitch
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This was feedback posted for Gongshow.
checking polls.... i say you got this gong........
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