RapVerse.com Community - verbal shoota vs MaRVJay1009

Voted For: Verbal Shoota

u even said 'dude jay is so nice',when ppl say u 2 gay its so rite.
cuzz da last time u had a "hot-punch" it was "kool aid with no ice".
......lol hott opener 8/10
now i got da rite 2...just kill verbal cuzz i really dont like dude.
so sombody gon be "signin a death certificate" but it wont be "ice cube".*
.....yea nice line 6/10
ya girl's a real slut suck me off till my 'sunz rise' like its "6 in da mornin".
put a shot in ya stomach & like "old piano's" ima get "rid ya ORGaNS".
......lol damn another good punch 8/10
pmin me everyday 2 join his crew....but only hoe's run with him.
and dis kid's punchlines like "shaq sneaker's"....."no 1 gets em".
yea aight kinda lost flow but good punch 6/10
dis nigga luv's battlin on a cpu..but me i wanna get off instead.
he like "spider man with a dry mouth" all he do is "spit on da web".
.......lol damn another hott punchline 8/10
u like ya 'avy' just "alot of lip".....lil bitch u wont fight got a greasy mouth.
a criminal? lol only time u had a "open-case" u was taken a "cd-out".
damn hott closer u killed it there 10/10

VS.

LOL.....marvjay, SMH.

Dude, you's a has-been....everybody says so.....check out time, man..

You're Rhymes played out the same time as the numbers in ya' name
queens u claim that run game? shit...I'll analyze the MC you've became
ok nice opener 6/10
No personals, Weak flow...most hated, But yo....you ''RUN RV?''
How?...last time i checked, ya' rep was D/R'S n you still lost too E.C
ok good line 6/10
I could swear...you wannabe me, even took the time too sig a fake quote
on that note...we all dyin too know...how ya verses even get One vote?
damn..... nice punch 8/10
Name a user who wouldnt abuse-ya, son....... like a bloodied Juvenile
wRappin a ball of yarn is the only time you got text-style[textile]
nice word play and good punch 10/10
rv in denile? or is it you?...last i heard, weak ass couldnt even find a crew
My puns leave ya pale as dandruff..
but ya always knew i'm head & shoulders above you like the shampoo
damn again good wordplay and good punchline 10/10
You shootin? ha!
didnt even make us look, disgracin' the rhyme book, Immitatin NAS
C'mon dog, you even get beat in a no-show battle, just ask...DAZ!
ok nice closer 8/10

Marv jayy1009 46/60 - good job on the verse really had some ill lines and punches and really liked that closer very good and also try to work a lil more on ya delivery there were some lines there that were good but didnt pack that many damage or didnt conncet as good but keep it up aight

Verbal shoota- 48/60- ok u eally brung alot of punchlines here so good job on that and the wordplay was very good as well try to keep it up wit a lil better vocab aight and thats it really just keep it up.....

v/ it was a tuff battle and very close but my v/ goes to VS just for bringin a lil harder wit his punches but u both did good keep it up yalll..........1.....