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Jack should win...

Weerd.......................

Voted For: Darth Vader

eh a alright battle ...


buy vader took this easy
Vader- your flow was very very on target the whole way through your vocab was basic but it worked well and it jus added to the overall drop...
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
that was by far the best line out of both of the drops ... and it was hella funny and had be going OOOHHHH haha nice drop

Stanza
you also had a really killer drop but the flow wasnt as on key .. your punches were jus really weak and didn't really hit as hard whenvaders really sorta out shined yours.. not to shabby though

for an overall better more harder hitting verse vader gets this

VOTE//VADER

lmfao, kid got ripped, way to come mad played fag boy.

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^^ your fucking me right? Vote man................

Voted For: Darth Vader

Holy fucking shit stanza sucks. v- jtr because his punches hit harder, his structure was better, he wasn't NEARLY as forced and i really really like his punches that get real creative. So vote jtr

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.................................Man What Kind of vote is dat?

Hey That Last Vote def does not count

call the battle 1-1 Bcuz thats gettn dqed

it was explained, dont bother, you still gonna lose :rolleyes:............

Voted For: Darth Vader

aiight this shit was easy um:

Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
lmao... I liked this. 8/10
Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
another nice line. lol 7/10
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
man jus leave the fuckin' site. :shoot: hell no!!! 2/10

17/30

nice shit basically except closer

Stanza:
Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
hangin' by the web? hell nah, reworded maybe, but no. 4/10
Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss
nigga wtf? no...... 3/10
Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet
ShabooNO!!!! 4/10

that's like 11 or 12 out of 30.

yo, I peeped your other shit, and wow. i expected better yo.

but v/JTR pc

ShabooNO, < LMFAO..................................

Voted For: Darth Vader

Darth Vader - Good spit, you had good flow, and wordplay. Punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'

Worst Line - NONE


Stanza - Good spit, flowed well.. had some decent personals and punches.

Best Line - Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss

Worst Line - Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man

OVERALL - Close battle here, both came with the punches swingin' and a damn niice flow. I had to give this to Darth cuz I felt his punches were landin' harder. Stanza work on stronger punches and you would have won this.

Vote - Darth Vader

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Aii You Won Man

You can Get It closed

4-1 KO

Nice battle man .............Peace

yea, thanks, you can have that soc vote dq'ed if you want, anyways, good battle though man, peace.

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...You bit, or flipped. I'm not sure but someone used that "Stanza beating" line ages ago.

Yeah No Hate No More man The battles done we got it off the chest so Lets Let It Rest LOL

Squashed?