Voted For: Black City


black back on dat bully shit, set up wack emcees and drop bee hives
call me 'infinite', cuz on a number line im 'too far ahead of phive' (five)

in dis battle im 'eatin you', phive a 'sandwich' and i guess im 'robust'
cuz my punchlines stack lumps on ya forehead like they was 'cold cuts'

you bust what? no gunz nigga, wit ya 'rat paws' you got 'no luck'
and plus you ugly, hoes dont let you 'come in' like 'young buck'

so go ahead and put ya best verse up and watch how one of my bars squash it
and as for votes for you, its like a 'picky fly', you 'dont get shit!'

omg, strait blows to the head...

direct punches, and some word play

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This battle fucking sux. Phives you should fucking quit or practice more cause that bullshit made my eyes hurt. I guess whoever im posting feed back for won. i didn't really read his verse cuz it started off whack.

Voted For: Black City

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198315
a yo first of all vote on my battle here man need one vote for it to be ova.(make sure u do that aight)

now to yallbattle black got it man your punches were harder. your stucture was better, and u some personals. solid flow black.
ohive structure were a little screwed. and instead of fuckin punchin how bout tryinto throw a couple of good ones next time. work on it

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