uppin cmon stop drinkin nyquil and vote on this its gettin slept on man

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Voted For: Pen N' Paper

Iight Really You Should Stop Making Center Battle Verses It Looks Dumb...

Openor-Pen And Paper, Came A Little Better With A Punch And Vocabulary
Personals-Tie, Because They Both Had Ok Personals
Punches-Ahh Both Were Ok, COuld Of Been Harder
Wordplay-Pen And Paper, His Wordplay Was Better Then K-Trini's
Vocabulary-Pen And Paper, Had A Little More Vocabulary
Closer-They Both Were A Little Blurry So No One Gets It

Overall, Pen And Paper Took This Battle Because Of His Vocabulary

Vote-Pen And Paper........

nah i just thought that center makes it look more decent but yea thnx for tha voite ill stop makin them like that then

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uppin this for votes cmon stop sleeepin

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ok uppin this cmon stp sleepin and wakeup and vote on battles....lol

get out of bed and vote yall sleepin too much now votes

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Voted For: Pen N' Paper

aiight pen and paper:
K-Trini u lacked skill, Livin Legendz didn’t want u cuz of ur stupidity
I always knew ya were an idiot, but rite now ur showin me ur simplicity
eh, not hard hittin' really.... 4/10
U rappin is like “Mic-heal Jordan” makin errors being a baseball player
The way u win battles is by swaying and realize in fact that ur a failure
eh... simple again....... 4/10
Man u “corny” I eat u up like “corn flakes” wit milk like you for breakfast
Even “lunch” or “dinner” man ill be “serving” ur wack ass so u can take this
nice word play attempt. 6/10
K-Trini man ur a mini bitch wit a gurl name ur punches are not gon be hittin
Ur other verses ive seen “stink like shit” whats the difference ur verse is shittin
haha it's coo 5/10
So K just face it u gay and theres no way for u to win this battle no prospect
Even in GFX, Topical, Audio and this in Text ill murk u cuz u just a speck…
eh, not that great.... 3/10

aiight, I'm seem better shit by you. but this was decent I guess. 22/50 (44%)

K-trini:

Pen&Paper So obssesed on stayin behind ,you'd ~write-it-late~
And you don't like the pen's function.....you just ~like-it's-shape~
no............. 2/10
It's like I'm amputating on a nuclues,cause I'm~stoppin-his-growth~
And this bitch dun wanna rap,he wanna ram my~cockin-his-throat~
no punch, not hard hittin...... 3/10
You would neva get close to stars like a review on a bad movie
Pen can follow ethics made by kin,but ya verse still won't move me
eh........... 4/10
Closest you get to stackin joints,is when you~pack-a-blunt~
Only time you loaded is when ya pumped ~back-and-front~
noooooooo....... 2/10

Damn, your other shit better than this. Try to be more witty and use wordplay. This was to simple. 11/50 (22%)

aiight V/ Pen and paper

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196402

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Voted For: Pen N' Paper

k-trini:
Pen&Paper So obssesed on stayin behind ,you'd ~write-it-late~
And you don't like the pen's function.....you just ~like-it's-shape~
^^^^I DONT KNOW IF U THOUGHT DIS WAS FUNNY...BUT DIS SHIT AINT MAKE NO SENSE AT ALL
It's like I'm amputating on a nuclues,cause I'm~stoppin-his-growth~
And this bitch dun wanna rap,he wanna ram my~cockin-his-throat~
^^^DUN???? WHAT DOES DAT MEAN??....BUT DIS WAS BAR WAS VERY HOMO U WANT HIM 2 STICK YA DICK IN HIS THROAT DATZ WHY U SAID DAT
You would neva get close to stars like a review on a bad movie
Pen can follow ethics made by kin,but ya verse still won't move me
^^^^^UR NOT BATTLIN KIN ETHICS WHY R U MENTIONIN HIM
Closest you get to stackin joints,is when you~pack-a-blunt~
Only time you loaded is when ya pumped ~back-and-front~
^^^^^LOADED...U PUMPED BACK AND FRONT???


pen n paper:
K-Trini u lacked skill, Livin Legendz didn’t want u cuz of ur stupidity
I always knew ya were an idiot, but rite now ur showin me ur simplicity
^^^DECENT...DIDN'T REALLY LIKE DA WAY IDS RYHMED
U rappin is like “Mic-heal Jordan” makin errors being a baseball player
The way u win battles is by swaying and realize in fact that ur a failure
^^^LMAOOO DIS BAR WAS TERRIBLE IT DIDN'T EVEN RYHME
Man u “corny” I eat u up like “corn flakes” wit milk like you for breakfast
Even “lunch” or “dinner” man ill be “serving” ur wack ass so u can take this
^^WACK..LOL
K-Trini man ur a mini bitch wit a gurl name ur punches are not gon be hittin
Ur other verses ive seen “stink like shit” whats the difference ur verse is shittin
^^^WHAT?????
So K just face it u gay and theres no way for u to win this battle no prospect
Even in GFX, Topical, Audio and this in Text ill murk u cuz u just a speck…
^^^^NO....


DIS BATTLE WAS TOTALLY WACK....BUT PEN WINS DIS CUZZ HIS BARS MADE MORE SENSE THAN TRINI'S I DIDN'T SEE 1 PUNCHLINE IN DIS WHOLE BATTLE FROM BOTH OF U

RETURN DA FAVOR

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Voted For: K-Trini

K-Trini u lacked skill, Livin Legendz didn’t want u cuz of ur stupidity
I always knew ya were an idiot, but rite now ur showin me ur simplicity
5-10
U rappin is like “Mic-heal Jordan” makin errors being a baseball player
The way u win battles is by swaying and realize in fact that ur a failure
5-10
Man u “corny” I eat u up like “corn flakes” wit milk like you for breakfast
Even “lunch” or “dinner” man ill be “serving” ur wack ass so u can take this
3-10
K-Trini man ur a mini bitch wit a gurl name ur punches are not gon be hittin
Ur other verses ive seen “stink like shit” whats the difference ur verse is shittin
3-10
So K just face it u gay and theres no way for u to win this battle no prospect
Even in GFX, Topical, Audio and this in Text ill murk u cuz u just a speck…
1-10

real soft verse, u tried personals dey werent hittin tho, u tried punches but dey werent affective, should try usin betta concepts


Pen&Paper So obssesed on stayin behind ,you'd ~write-it-late~
And you don't like the pen's function.....you just ~like-it's-shape~
5-10
It's like I'm amputating on a nuclues,cause I'm~stoppin-his-growth~
And this bitch dun wanna rap,he wanna ram my~cockin-his-throat~
wow gay? 4-10
You would neva get close to stars like a review on a bad movie
Pen can follow ethics made by kin,but ya verse still won't move me
attempted personal...5-10
Closest you get to stackin joints,is when you~pack-a-blunt~
Only time you loaded is when ya pumped ~back-and-front~
1-10

didnt get dat last line, but u tried a personal, tried punches, structure wasnt good but ya shit hit a lil harda than pen's

vote: k-trini

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