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Voted For: J.Terror


You nice? i wouldnt say thats true
Cuz if you sick, than Hitler's cool wit gay black Jews
^^^basic,weak,and pure whack
You can play that fool, ya wack that much we all can see
Look at is lines, they longer than the ones at the DMV
^^Ok
You gon need three MD's, when i flip ,click the trigga
He about to be kicked outta this "rap city" like Bigga Tigga
^^wat tha hell...dun bring up rap city,this line was whack
You a bitch nigga, so stupid and i love it
Last time you was "cockin heat" was a rooster in the oven
^^1st line as basic as basic gets,2nd was good
Ya gimmick is trash, wit raps like that , you meet oblivion fast
A shadow could bring Terror to J's wack Caribbean ass....
^^^a shadow?..c;mon...whack

Ur verse was whack.U can't make a line sayin"U a bitch,so stupuid,and I love it".Can't be dat basic.Gotta be more complex.Flow was choppy.Only decent line was one about long lines.

No need to swing jabs,see I already won this battle, even before you signed in
But you'll get hit twice like da twin towers,cuz my punches always "bin landin"

You Could punch through glass walls,& still not be a breakthrough performance
And my punches'll chin "check" dude, even If my nickname was "allow-ants"
^^^Nice
Jaw's fist bound for a pounding, teeth shall bow to my finest- cuz I’m hot
rip & tear this pussy so many times, he’ll be mo’ limbless than KFC cups
^^Nice
And when i say i'm win'N no doubt- i ain't talkin dates with Gwen Steffani
Cock thought a hollow tip was a contraceptive, so i put 2 on his head for safety
^^set up was good,punch itself lacked
Wreckin frames, ya career'll be hittin mo' brick walls, than test dummies
And hitch couldn't chest box, even if punchin with monopoly money
^^Nice

This was a nice verse.Every line was decent except for that one after Gwen stefani line.Flow was good,and so was structure.Nice werdplay at begiinning too.U sum it up at end "Easy"

Vote-J.Terror(please vote in link below)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589

Um im new here so i gotta ask this right quick...
isn't 3-0 a KO?

only if ya put it in the rules

aight..i see....yo since this dormant fuck worn't up his loss
I'm Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...dudes on this site is pussy'z

yo JTerror...........vote in link I posted in my vote........If ya dun do by tommorow....I'ma have to dq my vote.

uppin this shit, lets get some good votes on this joint

uppin this shit, lets get some good votes on this joint
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Voted For: J.Terror

wow, one sided...

terror gets this for a better structure, flow and mainly for actually using punches and some decent concepts...

Hitch, your om's are dop but im not feelin the concepts you use in battles, not your thing really...hit up some tutorials if you wanna learn.

NO HATE,

RTF in 3 days vs tephlon or this vote gets dq'ed!!!!

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Voted For: Hitchcock

Hitchcock:

Dope verse from you fam. I truly dont know how you are losing, because in my eyes, this should be a KO on your side. Punches were witty, creative, strong, hit hard, and all connected. Personals were there, hit, and were funny as shit. Your best line was the "cockin heat" punch. That was hilarious fam.

J. Terror:

Decent verse here...Lines are stretched, flow is off, and punches are lacking creativity. you have some decent wordplay, but your punches were not hitting or connecting. Most of your punches were also self glorification, like your opener for example. Thats a huge mistake in a battle.

V/ Hitchcock

me either, but oh well sometimes thats how shit goes around here. uppin for votes...1...

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Voted For: J.Terror

j easily nigga............................................. ...........

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Voted For: Hitchcock

J.TERROR
No need to swing jabs,see I already won this battle, even before you signed in
But you'll get hit twice like da twin towers,cuz my punches always "bin landin"
^nice word play, was feelin it 7/10^
You Could punch through glass walls,& still not be a breakthrough performance
And my punches'll chin "check" dude, even If my nickname was "allow-ants"
^wasnt feelin this more self glor. 3/10^
Jaw's fist bound for a pounding, teeth shall bow to my finest- cuz I’m hot
rip & tear this pussy so many times, he’ll be mo’ limbless than KFC cups
^Nah weak punch....didnt really rhyme 2/10^
And when i say i'm win'N no doubt- i ain't talkin dates with Gwen Steffani
Cock thought a hollow tip was a contraceptive, so i put 2 on his head for safety
^Ok vocab but again those words dont rhyme well....and it was more self glor.0/10^
Wreckin frames, ya career'll be hittin mo' brick walls, than test dummies
And hitch couldn't chest box, even if punchin with monopoly money
^Good, reference felt it nice closer 4/10^

Hitchcock
You nice? i wouldnt say thats true
Cuz if you sick, than Hitler's cool wit gay black Jews
^Nice punch i was feelin it good flow 6/10^
You can play that fool, ya wack that much we all can see
Look at is lines, they longer than the ones at the DMV
^ooooo,nice dice yo.....good reference 7/10^
You gon need three MD's, when i flip ,click the trigga
He about to be kicked outta this "rap city" like Bigga Tigga
^Nice punch...nothing too special4/10^
You a bitch nigga, so stupid and i love it
Last time you was "cockin heat" was a rooster in the oven
^Haha nice diss yo like this one...5/10^
Ya gimmick is trash, wit raps like that , you meet oblivion fast
A shadow could bring Terror to J's wack Caribbean ass....
^Awesome closer was fealin it 6/10^

Over all hitchcock came with harder punches that wear more appealing and able to see.J.terror had good wordplay and better structure.But hitchcock took it away with his hard hitting punches in almost everyline....cant beat good punches
V/HITCHCOCK

RTF SINCE I KINDLY PEEPED YOURS OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED

thanks for the honest vote, uppin this joint for more