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This was feedback posted for Payn
EZ...............
already voted on LL alias.... |
Voted For: Payn
ok..... DZK's structure n flow was fucked up, hard to read yo shit man.... need to use multi's and improve vocab n punchlines.. Payn's structure wasn't that good but he had much betta flow, wordplayed a bit, and better personals.. so that wins the battle... Payn - 7/10 DZK - 4/10 V/Payn Be sure to RTF... fo more honest votes... battles on my sig. |
hold on, i didnt mean to put VOTE for dzk, but sound click is down, ima put in a link to the song that dude bit from...
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and i did a lot for you niggas, this is thanks i get..
Your my son........you should thank my dick.. cassidy dissin murda mook. |
lmao, posted in the wrong thread!!!!.......
but yeah he a herb who bit....prolly just as a prank tho... |
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This was feedback posted for DZK_BURYMORE
wack battle...and you ain't DZK...................
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Voted For: DZK_BURYMORE
Checking the faggotry polls here.. wtf@thisdudesverse |
uppin this shit for some votes....and oh yeah no i didnt name bite anyone u think theres only one DZK in this whole world?...get a life
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uppin this shit for some votes....and oh yeah no i didnt name bite anyone u think theres only one DZK in this whole world?...get a life
^first of all, dont say that when you have dzk and his old alias burymore in ya name.... lol....yep, i think there is only one dzk in the world..and a bajillion kids who copy him cuz they have no skill... like i said, HAVE THIS BATTLE CLOSED, DUDE CHEATED, BIT THE NAME OF THE ARTIST AND HIS LYRICS, I POSTED THE LINK TO WHERE HE BIT... GET AT IT AND HAVE THIS FUCK BANNED!!! DUDE, ur a homo... Quote:
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This was feedback posted for DZK_BURYMORE
lol is this a joke.................................
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Voted For: Payn
Payn will verbally knock out ya dentals..\ in text i'm suspensful when i jot wit pencils\\ ^^self glorifing have diz newbie hit more soft spots..Shit, u'd think he was in a mental hospital!..\ no rank is wut ya text gets, Out Breathe Kid? my punches land where ya chest is..\ ^^this bar didn't rhyme topin' me.. nah, b stay infront of hoods, buryin' more DZK's & i'm not talkin' bout breathing methods!..\ ^^self glorifing i'll counter ya attack as my blows flow Around yah hits, Fist'll pound yah spits.. But bitch, i'll have you lookin up to 20, Like checking for conterfeits!.. ^^nope...weak and whack The win i doubt you can handle..Cus yah chest calvical im bout to dis-mantle.. Cus Only tyme L ova my head is when doing sign langague of your outcome in this battle!.. ^^^whack Hood you awful-wita-pen..i'll shove my fist in yah mouth an put yah talking-an-end.. Cus Payn will rip thru yah arteries from yah chest and through yah temple..cause it apparent you thought-you-had-a-win!.. ^^weak Ur shit suked.....too much self glorifying and no werdplay,meta,or personals.Save that glorifying shit for Open mic.And structure ur verse better.Shit was ugly. beat your head in death to my enimies ur on ur last leg im a frekin centipied, ^^wasn't a punch im from west virginia ill put sumtin sharp in ya stabbin men in they abdomin so hard my javolin splinters, ^^^self glorifying hits so hard it hits six parts of ya inners causin enternal bleedin seein my light on this text is the only way your still breathin, ^^OK ill teach you a thing or 2 when i kidnap and drag you and your family handily to the back of my labroom ^^diss god damn it leave your mother-fucked gutted and shackled hung from a block of tackle, from the tub in my bathroom leave your brother and sister coverd in stabwounds ^^stop...make a punchline maggots crawlin in and out of your dads blood splatterd jacket and a rappers kadabber looks like rabbid badgers got at it, ^^whack see sadness just isnt a emtion im capable of havin so in takin you breakin you and laughin, and when i say breakin u i dont mean mentally actually i mean most of your bones bein broken and crackalin\ ^^omg Same shit.U glorified a lot and had too much gangster tak.U didn't have any punches like the other guy.So I gotta base it on flow.Ur structure was far better than payn.And so was ur flow.So ya got my vote. Vote-DZK(vote in link below please) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901 Vote switched |
ooh shit mybad.....I'll report my vote to have it switched
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uppin this.............................................. ...
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This was feedback posted for DZK_BURYMORE
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