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Voted For: Astound
jms - punches werent that hard, structure needs work & ur flow needs improving.. but work on ur punches though.. Ast - ur punches weren't that hard hittin either.. structure was far too-strectched & the flow lack'd here.. elevate more both no hate |
Voted For: Astound
Astound... ya verse was pretty good, flow was good punches could of been better. vocab was alright... was kinda basic... ya 1st bar was your best... ya worst bar was the 2nd... puches were pretty good to... little bit more elivation and ya'll be real good jms... ya verse was a little on the weak side... ya lines were a little to short like yur 5th line... short lines ruin the flow and dont have enough to them to make the punch work... ya got good ideas and concepts but just gotta work on the writin part of it ****Return a vote on my battle or I will remove my vote, see the link below my sig**** *no hate just honest opinion* |
4-1, and thank you to everyone who has voted. Thanks for the compliment one mic. This is the first up.
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uppin for sum more votes
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Voted For: Astound
astound gets ny vote my vote simply coz one mic came whack astound you didnt come that strong but it was a hella lot better that one mic's |
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