Voted For: K-Trini

ok nice battle but cant believe that k-trini came hard this time she had a nice line and wordplay and some good vcab but still need to improve
bliss u needed to ahve a better flow and u need to work on da delivery to ur punches so they can pack more damage but both did a good job but i felt that k-trini did a better one by brigin more pact to the punches but still gopod my vote goes to k-trini

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Voted For: sinkerdechevin

aiight lets see what goes down in this bitch nigga, nah mean?

K-trini, you didn't come that hard. Shit there were like no punches nigga. Your flow was ok. But get better wit the punches. Add wit and all that shit. nah mean?

Bliss, you came dope wit the wordplay nigga. That opener had me sayin' "Nigga wtf? that's dope nigga". Shit was gangsta. Closer was illy too yo. I was feelin' this shit. word. gangsta

v/Bliss word :shoot:

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Voted For: K-Trini

Bliss - your verse had better punches once you read over it a few times, you had some gud personals, where as trini had none at all!, your flow was good, vocabulary needs a bit of improving but its all gud,wordplay was sick. structure was good, overall i think the personals and wordplay won u this battle

trini - your verse had more vocabulary, punches were easier to read, but once u understand Bliss's he killed you, you didnt use punches or barley any word play... plus why do u always change ur structre and flow in ur battles it doesnt make sence, looks a bit suspicious!

vote / bliss!


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wat ya mean.......might think I bite??...................

ok, this is fucking gay man......enough of these shit votes

this is gay, no one is getting my wordplay

Voted For: K-Trini

Bliss
bitch outta your league...step to the plate but its a K ya see
cause im throwing 3 strikes, one for each of his nis
..LOL That Sucked man No Lie and no Hate but It was to Thought of it seemed way "Into it"

surrounded by water, still cant coast away with this, im sure of that
cause isle snub k away faster than covering trinidad on the map
/........Weak.........
dont get all high strung about winning, cause somewhere ya got tangled
its sad...tri still couldn't cut it if he looked from every angle
......The wordplay HAd no back support what was the point of sayin Tri angle with no punch to it ? ....weak/

Overall man i think That u need to work on Supporting hard punche with good wordplay and good wordplay with hard punchez your verse was overall weak and You need to work on that man

Trini
Cheven...swears he owns me,but tried to duck this battle
&U a "cow-werd",way ya always get merked in RV's cattle
...aii...
Faggot labeled me a newbie and herb........but he d/r's them
& This fag couldn't spit think if masticated reguriated phylem(pronounced-flem)
...Good...
I'd use my best against you,but dat'd just be a waste
Only water can like your rhymes cause it got no taste
....Aii...

Oevarll You didnt do half bad you did good enough to take this battle and that why you get my vote

so m v/ Trini

Voted For: sinkerdechevin

bliss won this easily...

like damn...easily....

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Voted For: sinkerdechevin

K-Trini
Cheven...swears he owns me,but tried to duck this battle
&U a "cow-werd",way ya always get merked in RV's cattle
Not feelin...
Faggot labeled me a newbie and herb........but he d/r's them
& This fag couldn't spit think if masticated reguriated phylem(pronounced-flem)
Played Concept
I'd use my best against you,but dat'd just be a waste
Only water can like your rhymes cause it got no taste
Didn't hit at all...

blisss
bitch outta your league...step to the plate but its a K ya see
cause im throwing 3 strikes, one for each of his nis
Good wordplay...knees...nis in his name..weerd
surrounded by water, still cant coast away with this, im sure of that
cause isle snub k away faster than covering trinidad on the map
Dope play off his name...
dont get all high strung about winning, cause somewhere ya got tangled
its sad...tri still couldn't cut it if he looked from every angle
Triangle...haha word...


This was an easy one sided battle...

Vote: blisss

Voted For: sinkerdechevin

bitch outta your league...step to the plate but its a K ya see
cause im throwing 3 strikes, one for each of his nis
hah.. this punch was aight
surrounded by water, still cant coast away with this, im sure of that
cause isle snub k away faster than covering trinidad on the map
coo punch
dont get all high strung about winning, cause somewhere ya got tangled
its sad...tri still couldn't cut it if he looked from every angle
weak closer



Cheven...swears he owns me,but tried to duck this battle
&U a "cow-werd",way ya always get merked in RV's cattle
decent opener
Faggot labeled me a newbie and herb........but he d/r's them
& This fag couldn't spit think if masticated reguriated phylem(pronounced-flem)
wack
I'd use my best against you,but dat'd just be a waste
Only water can like your rhymes cause it got no taste
not really feelin this punch


overall this battle was pretty-much 1-sided..
bliss had the harder punches in this battle
trini ur punches were okay, but not hard enuff
to actually get my vote here though

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