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ayo Fate trini sent me sum money like 2billion sumin rv money

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And I'm leavin this site....I gotta go back to Trinidad.So I squashed all the beef.

Voted For: Black Queen

this vote goes to the queen.....vocab was much sicker and flow was on point. 9/10

Voted For: .:F.ate:.

Love it . . . both were good . . . but i have to give the edge to Fate: i like the parallel structure at the end "i am" . . . i think both of you really brought out the pen's point of view so in that sense it was a tie . . . and both of u did it differently . . . Black Queen brining out the purpose of the pen . . fate looking more at the impact. . . Still very good drop --- making it hard to vote----- but my vote goes to FATE

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Voted For: .:F.ate:.

When I read the topic...I thought it was dope.Till I read the verses...and was dissapointed.You guys could have really done better.

Flow-Black Queen had some rhymes that didn't rhyme.Fate had a basic rhyme sheme ....but it flowed nevertheless.BQ seemed to force rhyme.Like the first bar.Fate even had alliteration a bit too!

Content-Both failed teribby in this part.FAte had bigger vocab.My fav. line was the one about Tupac.To me...black queen had nothing that'd stay with me for a while.

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