uppin to close this real fast.....................

This was feedback posted for M.C.
 

Voted For: Jameson

MC-
IP:


Jameson must think he’s dope.. but your nowhere near the ranks
He told me to paint him a portrait.. but I kept drawing blanks
Decent punch/opener
damn kid.. your rhymes are shitty..
..I’ll smack you with a bar of soap
I wouldn’t let you in my crew, cause we can’t take a joke
Blah...stupid bar soap/shitty lines are played
& this hoe that my text is nice, that’s the only shit he loves
but, my punches will suck if brought up..
..Anything like Jameson was
Blah closer..

MC- Needs harder hitting punches one of the disses were decent..ok flow though.

Jameson-

This isn't fair cause hes not on my level... After this said hes dead,
Cause him sucking my dick is the closest i'll 'cum' to goin 'head to head,'
cum/head lines are PLAYED AS FUCK
It could be 2 on 1... but this dude is so stupid and shit you can tell,
Cause I asked for a handicaped match and he brought a pic. of himself!
pretty funny bar ok diss
M.C. winning this battle.... That would be defying laws and sense,
You making the crowd scream? There must be a gun in the audience...
decent closer

Jameson- Need more creativity in your punches..disses were decent.

V/Jameson, he had harder disses and punches, flow as good too.

Voted For: M.C.

MC:

Jameson must think he’s dope.. but your nowhere near the ranks
He told me to paint him a portrait.. but I kept drawing blanks

^^lmao....solid punch

damn kid.. your rhymes are shitty..
..I’ll smack you with a bar of soap
I wouldn’t let you in my crew, cause we can’t take a joke

damn, thats 2........

& this hoe that my text is nice, that’s the only shit he loves
but, my punches will suck if brought up..
..Anything like Jameson was

^^setup was kinda hard 2 follow but tha closer was decent

don't understand my punches, don't bother voting

7/10


Jameson:

Buck on these bitches who hate....

This isn't fair cause hes not on my level... After this said hes dead,
Cause him sucking my dick is the closest i'll 'cum' to goin 'head to head,'

lmao...nice

It could be 2 on 1... but this dude is so stupid and shit you can tell,
Cause I asked for a handicaped match and he brought a pic. of himself!

wut tha fuck?????


M.C. winning this battle.... That would be defying laws and sense,
You making the crowd scream? There must be a gun in the audience...

No, no mayn, just ....no

Meh, quick spit.


4/10

MC takes this one mainly because of punches....he ate u alive wit tha line about u tryin 2 join his crew...structure was about even, but some parts in both didn't seem to make sense, easy battle tho.

oh yeah, return tha favor in my topical battle against black queen or i'll have this removed

Voted For: M.C.

return the favor for this vote aight
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199108

nice close battle man my vote goes to m.c.
both of u had good personals and punches
but mcs was a little better to me but u both did aight
nice sturcture for both of u to

please rtf at my battle:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199108