forcin rhymes? lol, where exactly?

and how was i not creative, i basically played off his name yo, so almost everyline was a personal....oh, and one-word rhyming is not multies....but thanks yo

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what i meant by forcin rhymes is dat words u used....like u could have found better ones is all im sayin....and i dont consider playin off his name as a personal....personals to me is shit dats about him...and who said anything about one-word rhymin...when i do multies its like 4 rhymin words in one line so thats 8 rhymin words a bar and the shit still makes sense...thats multies....

just be happy you got the fuckin vote..be thankful.....yall kids now a-days b wallin out when sum 1 critique your work...just because they say shit that u didnt want them 2 say...ne wayz no beef...just tellin u how it is

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^ word judicial, your explanation was pretty gay

like bernonedown has been here for what? a month, with like 8 posts.....not much personals dude, and there was like nothing forced....

but anyways, practise what ya preach

drakel....you know there could have been better personals thought of....he had good name play yeah....and do u honestly think you have to go through and give 100% detail on your votes...nah...but still i gave him the vote cuz he had the better verse...i just gave him ideas to make him better...

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Voted For: blisss

BERN-YOUR STRUCTURE WAS GARBAGE AS HELL....FLOW WAS AIGH BUT YOU HAD ONE LINE IN THERE THAT WAS STRECHED LONGER THEN GIRAFES NECKS...AND YOUR PUNCHES WERE THROWN BUT FELT LIKE SLAPS....




bLISS-VERSE HAD BETTER STRUCTURE AND SOME PUNCHES WERE THROWN AND HIT AND SOME WERE THROWN WIT YOUR GLASSES OFF...BUT YOUR VERSE WAS ENUFF TO WIN

Voted For: blisss

bern- o wow what was that no punches no flow structure was horrible......you need to elevate..alot

bliss-you need to get more punches and work on everything 2

v/bliss..you kno why

Voted For: blisss

alright im voting for u because ur punches were alot better and the other kid dint even rhyme lol
sern work on ur struc seriously