just uppin again...........

This was feedback posted for BLaCK_HEaRT
 

Voted For: BLaCK_HEaRT

Do i Really Need To Explain My Vote? Dis Blaccs Battle i mean DAMN..'Cmon now look at the verses in length for started and reading it blacc juss well theres no words to describe how badly u juss got knocked da fuck out lyrickz

Voted For: lyrickz

ahhaahahahhahah lmfao.....
cuz once i seize-ya, all of your worldly hope will leave-ya/
(you'll) wake up from ya coma, probably swearing you spoke-with-jesus/
^^^^^^^
hahahahaah lyricz good stuff .. here hard punch


IP:


Wanna be thug, i'll leave this fake crip crippled/
you poppin off slugs,me and my niggas launching missiles/
trying to be hard, showcasing blue and black images(in his sig)/
you're pride will be scarred; leave u with black and blue blemishes/
you aint ready-to-flow, u like a ho....always ready-to-blow/
i'll chop u up and toss u up like confetti-to-throw/
^^^^^^^^^
ahahah good werd play.. and great opener... (man fuck all this gangs and shit..thats why i hate snoop dogg.. .. he alright at timesbut .he a bitch... Pac a true man...

anyways back to the battle i'll chop u up and toss u up like confetti-to-throw/
wanna be street sergent, you just a bad-soulja'/
like Catholics at lent, this nigga gets passed-over/
^^^^^^^^^^^^
lolol ahahah lmfao..good stuf here Lyrics took one //// good battle here..
dat other guy hus in2 all them gangs and wat not... Elevate nuff said..
Lyrics good punches har vocab.. werd play wuz top notch..aiight good stuff..

return the favour.... in my battlesbelow...aiight

Voted For: BLaCK_HEaRT

yo black heart got my vote
his punches were harder and his personals were also
lyrickz u had some nice ones too but not as hard a black

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199108
return the favor here at my battle

Voted For: lyrickz

Lyrickz:

Wanna be thug, i'll leave this fake crip crippled/
you poppin off slugs,me and my niggas launching missiles/
^^basically filler 3/10
trying to be hard, showcasing blue and black images(in his sig)/
you're pride will be scarred; leave u with black and blue blemishes/
^^ehh ok 4/10
you aint ready-to-flow, u like a ho....always ready-to-blow/
i'll chop u up and toss u up like confetti-to-throw/
^^good flow nice multies decent punch 7/10
wanna be street sergent, you just a bad-soulja'/
like Catholics at lent, this nigga gets passed-over/
^^dope bar nice meta 9/10
like atheists-turned preachers, (i'll) make black a believer/
give u this holy ghost, well actually, its just a seizure/
^^decent 5/10
cuz once i seize-ya, all of your worldly hope will leave-ya/
(you'll) wake up from ya coma, probably swearing you spoke-with-jesus/
^^no 2/10

Overall: 30/60 (50%)


Black_Heart:

You couldn't have hot bars even if you was in a africa Jail "Cell All Night"//
You can't tell this guy dosen't have lyrics he couldn't even "spell it right"//(Lyrickz)
^^nice nameplay decent meta 6/10
Fake ass vocabulary, for this battle "Save The Grammar"//
I'll leave a cut on his face longer than the goatee on "David-Banner"//
^^lol this was alright 6/10
When ya bitch top off, she fear-ful of sins, but still a "Dumb-Hoe"//
You a 6-0-1 Repsenta 6 Losses, 0 Wins, and "One-No-Show"//
^^ehh ok 4/10
I'm the answer but i ain't playing ball and make "Cheddar-in-Philly"//
I'll leave more bullet holes in your face, than the # of "Letters in Mississippi"//
^^decent 4/10
If i'm i go to your job, i'm taking ya work "You Ain't Making Pay Then"//
You from jack town ??? It must mean yall "Masterbate-Men"//
^^good bar 6/10
No Fighting Friends, Slugs as big as Heinkens, GET YA WEIGHT UP "Like you Diet-in"//
Have ya crew steady dyin when, ya hood i'm drivin in You couldn't dodge it if you had the "spidy sense"//
^^too stretched 3/10
Put it to your dome, YA KNOW ... imma let the "Chrome-Bake"//
To your "Bones-Break" and leave in the river of your "home state"//
^^decent bar 5/10
Is it Generic, that your family can't "spit lyrics"//
Have FEAR PRICK, even deaf cliccs can't still "Hear-This"//
^^no 3/10

Overall: 37/80 (46%)


Vote: Lyrickz


Please return the favor and vote on this battle honestly

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=200663