man this was good, really enjoyed readin it, flowed really well, good use of 3 word rhymes, not many people can do that, and i agree it could've been a lil longer but it still made the poin and was still great, keep it up man

Good piece man, like the words and the way you intertwined the bible in with the way you felt the country was run, it was all a good piece, and had good points. Great piece. 10/10.

thankyou very much, more feed anyone?