And I killed you. Along with everybody else you've battled. :thumbup:

Please Vote......................................

~R~

Holy Shit....Fucking Vote You God Damn Cocksucking Bastards.

~R~

Sperm burping cum dumpster bitches!!

This was feedback posted for R-Rated
 

that R dude got this shit..........................

^ then vote you stupid fuck.

uhp...............................................

Voted For: R-Rated

ok nice topic here....both did good here very hard to decide also so ill break it down a lil
RR- u had a good piece nice emotions,vocab,structure,flow, and basicly everythin except i didnt like ur creativity i think it coulda been better from u.....but still a good piece keep it up and jus work more on creativity jus a lil more aight....
GS-ok u had a good piece good vocab usage and a good structure and like RR u need to work more on that creativity but u also u need to work a lil more in ur emotion and jus a dash more in vocab but ur imagery was very good......
V/ RR urs was more better when i broke it down so....u get tha vote....but both did good jus RR had a better verse cuz GS u were missin ur emotion and vocab there but still good from both and keep them up......but my v/ goes to r-rated.....
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PLZ RTF wit a honest vote on my battles in my sig......or vote gets removed.......

Uppin This...V.O.T.E.!!!

Damn Muphuckas..

~R~

Voted For: R-Rated

Gong-I was feelin ya verse here kid...nice ..ok imagery
but i wasent feeling that much emotion..
could have used better Vocab..and like i said better emotion
in a topical u need 2 make the voter feel your words from
the jump and i didnt walk away with that from your drop

R-Excellent drop here ..Nice imagery..i was feelin the
emotion...nice structure..and the vocab was top notch
u used everything that a topical need 2 contain and
used it and Executed.....Nice Topical here ya

Thanks For Honest Votes...


Upping This For More Votes..Only One More Needed To Close This.

Voted For: R-Rated

Flow-Damn....R-rated murder Gongshow in this catergory.SHit...Rated even had alliteration.A rare sight thses days.
"Pratically Particular To Secular Sections of Self Salvation.."
^^DAMN...talk about tongue twisters

Content-Like all topicals..there were points when I was bored.Concept wasn't really inovative by neither.Imajery was better by R.Gong..my advice is to get a little more complex.

Wording-R as usual.The lines just seemed to be made for each other.Nice job here.Gong...wording is not something that can be taught...it's something that gonna come from experience

Multis-R....not many lines(if any) where he rhymed words with one sllyables.

Vocab-R....every like had one word that can be found on a high school exam

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