uppin this cmon votes.............................

wow when will this get more votes cmon upppin this shit..........

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good battle here upppin this for votes................

Voted For: Pen N' Paper

Murdz- OOOO Not bad. I liked the imagery, good vocab. Next time you battle dont a;gkljagl-gjgdl;kj<<< That. Please? It's messing up the reader eyes (me). I say Upp on the emotion, put some meta'z and similies in it. But The best aspect in your verse was the imagery, and the vocab. Liking the flow on 3rd person, good multi'z

Pen&Paper- Hmmm Emotion is kinda lacked in few places, needs to be upp. Vocab needs to be upp. I liked the imagery, an d the wordplays toward the end was good, it kinda expand your imagery. You had a little bit of emotion, next time expand it.

Overall=Both of you lacked emotion, but both of you had good imagery. Murdz Nice, I liked your approach, could've been better. The Imagery was good, the emotion lacked. Pen and Paper, I liekd your approach also, You had good vivid imagery and emotion (A little) and that's why I'm giving you the vote. Murdz Nice verse but emotion lacked and pen and paper had that and plus his imagery was better. So vote/Pen and Paper.

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Wait that needs to be changed then thats my vote^^ ill get that changed then cuz the 2nd one is mine......lol......so ill get that removed to my vote.......1

WTF, chief has done that 2 times now!! he said that exact explination in a battle, not even topical of mine and voted against me!!! this is fuckin bullshit...

i kno man he did that to me too.....in cezar battle but anyways .........

upppin.........this cmon more votes here please.......

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cmon more votes plz close this.....lol uppin for votes......

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uppin like always.....................

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