I Like the beat...The way you approach in the first verse with the multi'z is nice. Decent Flow. Lyrics..Good, Good. I'm liking the wordplay. Ok when you rapping and the chorus I think overlaping is decent.

2nd verse

Alright still I'm liking your flow. Nice lyrics. Hmmmm To me nothing stood out. Except the flow.

3rd verse lol @ angelo. Alright I'm likeing the wordplays. Again with the multi'z.

Ovrall= This was a good audio, alots of good wordplays and decent flow. Loving the chorus. And the mulit'z is decent.

Keep doing you.

Aight here's all i gotta say Trip,

From metropolis to metropolis everbody copping this,rocking trips thesis every region acknowledges, the knowledge lived known or gained in colleges,gladly accepting a GED recipients prophesis.........


Hotness kid get at me...............................

good choice of beat.. me likes, flow was flawless.. lyrics were on point ez, chorus was creative and fit well, i could hear this on the radio cuz it's catchy. This should be voted for The Featured Audio in this forum... :thumbup:

get at me.
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Beat is nice..but I feel I heard this before..

Hahaha ya voice is so damn deep

Nice hook it's catchy ass hell

peepin.... i used this beat b4, flow comes in nyce, emotion coo, overdubs def make it stand out nycely... chorus, dunno about tha samples but the lyrics are cool... 2nd verse is def feelin nyce.. widda ball point pen.. lol... good vocab in this... haters gotta face it.. coo..i dont get the glowstick line... i like when u go off n change ur notes in some parts if u did a whole verse like that it would b sick... holler at me man, i got that beat... pretty coo shhyt....

yeah... shit was thorough.... especially that hook... ya did ya thang on this one trip... nice to see you holding ya own for once...lol... the beat was ill... ya flow was on point and the met's were straight.... stay solo for a while...lol

this track is hot, impressin me..

i like the verses, that "like vegetarians, leavin beef on the table" is tight.. really feelin that.. not really feelin the chorus tho.. tight track tho, nice job..

this was pretty dope i mean i think everyone tocuhed on it.10/10

Word to everybody...Hot ass track...One of the best I've seen on RV...what else can I say..? Just keep doin' what you do haha...

Listening through Audio Technica STH-M40fs studio monitor headphones.

I don't liek the way this beats starts off, mostly because I cna't stand overly-synthed sounds that are obviously not made with a real instrument. Jsut a flat-ass midi tone.

Vocal quality is on the money as expected, but you needed to EQ some of the 808 outta the bass in the beat since when it really hits I cna't hear you at all. The lyrical content of the first verse was average, delivery was dead on. The hook, the "come on then nigga" should have had some of the reverb and some of the compressoion taken down because it really thins out the effectiveness of it and makes it sound flat. The hook it self has the same problem where you can't really make out specifically wht you're saying - just kinda hearing the sounds and the melody of it. Just sounds vague and makes it obvious that you're just going through the motions to bang out a club track. Second verse brings some much needed diversity to the delivery so the verses don't all sound a like. It peaked my attention again when you changed the cadence in the second verse where as I was starting to zone out prior to that. The third verse reminds me of the first one where as it had nothing that made me really say "damn, that's pretty hot". I think it's the mundane deliv in it. Switch it up - attack the cadence from time to time. Stall it out, flip it up, etc.

I feel the same about the outro as I do on the intro. I'm also personally getitng bored with you and club songs. Starting to seem liek a stereotype of NNN.


Honest feed as always. Uno.