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Thanks, If You Like This One you Should Read Chapter Two Ft Troop In My Sig
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Dope drop
emotional shit structure was nice vocab was iight flow was good keep it up mayne |
Good Looking Dawg
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Fuck Man Bumping
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i liked this peace ALOT cause you didnt fabricate it its the truth it is what ur goin through and its not sugar coated......all the Multies. Metas. Vocab. and all that DONT matter in a peace like this....this is truly an Open Mic when u speak ur mind.........9/10 great drop
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Thanks Man I Appreciate It
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You cannot up unless a link is dropped in which you left proper feed on.If you're confused veiw the new rules.
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Nigga I Put Feed On That Shit Dude
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No read the rules if you're confused.
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This was nice at points, but at others it had me a little undecided. It was more of a like......audio style, the way you formatted and spoke the words through an OM. I would suggest making it a little longer, add some creativity and in-depth storylines......Rap vs Love was a good topic to write about, and i think u wrote on it nicely. Just keep dropping, youll improve, check out Love is Blind please.
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HaHa LMAO! Okay
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WHat was that for may i ask ?
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