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Formation 07-08-05 07:57 PM

Thanks, If You Like This One you Should Read Chapter Two Ft Troop In My Sig

Static 07-08-05 10:02 PM

Dope drop
emotional shit
structure was nice
vocab was iight
flow was good

keep it up mayne

Formation 07-08-05 10:03 PM

Good Looking Dawg

Formation 07-09-05 01:49 AM

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Formation 07-09-05 02:55 AM

Fuck Man Bumping

Lyriclesolja 07-09-05 03:03 AM

i liked this peace ALOT cause you didnt fabricate it its the truth it is what ur goin through and its not sugar coated......all the Multies. Metas. Vocab. and all that DONT matter in a peace like this....this is truly an Open Mic when u speak ur mind.........9/10 great drop

Formation 07-09-05 03:16 AM

Thanks Man I Appreciate It

Formation 07-09-05 04:16 PM

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Indeph 07-09-05 05:23 PM

You cannot up unless a link is dropped in which you left proper feed on.If you're confused veiw the new rules.

Formation 07-09-05 07:28 PM

Nigga I Put Feed On That Shit Dude

Indeph 07-09-05 08:30 PM

No read the rules if you're confused.

Textcee Bob 07-09-05 10:13 PM

This was nice at points, but at others it had me a little undecided. It was more of a like......audio style, the way you formatted and spoke the words through an OM. I would suggest making it a little longer, add some creativity and in-depth storylines......Rap vs Love was a good topic to write about, and i think u wrote on it nicely. Just keep dropping, youll improve, check out Love is Blind please.

Pz

Formation 07-09-05 11:40 PM

HaHa LMAO! Okay

Textcee Bob 07-09-05 11:42 PM

WHat was that for may i ask ?


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