This was feedback posted for RhymnSicC
 

Just checking the polls..

Like wicka what :shoot:

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Voted For: K-Trin

Why in ya profile da only thang it says is gone/
im guessin dats da only thang u can spell, cause u aint been in school fo dat long
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lmfao....hahaahahahahahahah haahahha herb..... if he didnt go to school ..how the fuck is he battlin u????

Me battle'n u, iz lyke me battle'n a a dude dat ain't gotta head/
how da fuck u plannin on dropin yo lines if u can't spell, nigga ya dead/
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wdf dats the same shit well almost same shit you used against me..... u fukin suck ....
give up rap mate.... ur fuked at it or elevate....

aiight K-trinYou Neva been in the lime-light,despite ur name rhymnsikC
The Only pound this guy's familar with is found in the bakery
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haha lol good werd play here

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Who is this cat?,c'mon,I got more wins than he got posts
This is his own battle,yet,he ain't wouldn't be able to vote
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i 2nd dat..... ahhaahahha good opener

overall vote goes to k-trin no doubt hands down....
had flow good punches , good construction.. a 7/10 probably... xcept i didnt get the last bars... how did that rhyme...

rhyminsc elevate nuff said

holla and return the favour K-trin in my battle ..against this fool........ ahha ... thnkx...

Voted For: K-Trin

Who is this cat?,c'mon,I got more wins than he got posts
This is his own battle,yet,he ain't wouldn't be able to vote
ok...first line was nice second fell off
You Neva been in the lime-light,despite ur name rhymnsikC
The Only pound this guy's familar with is found in the bakery
explain to me where the rhyme is in here?!?!
You stare face to face with death when you met ur own fans
The Claps heard at ur shows come from when ya get backhand'd
um...ok i guess


Breakdown-this verse wasn't really good...only line that was nice was your first line...try to add a lil more complexity into your verse...and stop being so elementary



k-trin u only fifteen u not ready to battle me/
I'll eat ya ass up as if u was a whopper from burger king/
um...ok ELEMENTARY
Why in ya profile da only thang it says is gone/
im guessin dats da only thang u can spell, cause u aint been in school fo dat long/
the real question is How long have you been in school?
Me battle'n u, iz lyke me battle'n a a dude dat ain't gotta head/
how da fuck u plannin on dropin yo lines if u can't spell, nigga ya dead/
haha...........<<<<<<<<<laughin at you and not wit you!



Breakdown-you talk about spelling and your verse has more spellin errors then his please explain....verse was more Garbage then.............well Garbage...

K-Trin=6 spelling errors
Rhymesic=26 spelling errors.......so you tell me who has been in school longer

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Voted For: K-Trin

i don't really think i have to explain y i am voting for k-trin . . . do i? just so it doesn't get disqualified

Who has the better flow or structure-- K-trin
word Ply punches creativity . .ect. . .-- K-trin
Opening and closer--- K-trin even though u did exactly what u vote against (self-glorification-- sound fimilar? ---LOL)

Honestly i think this was a waste of a thread rhymnsicC just got beasted on-- wich isn't always bad . . . learn fix and come back better

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Voted For: K-Trin

k-trin wins this hands down
rhymnsicc, u prolly shouldn't use "u cant spell" as a diss, because u cant either
plus sicc had no wordplay, and no GOOD punches
K-Trin, great opening and closing, u could've one this one only using those 2 lines
good flow and wordplay by K-Trin too

please vote on my battle w/DoContinue
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=198898