Voted For: flow verse

flow verse has a killer opening and closing, the closing is probably the best punch of the battle

good wordplay by fv, but maybe too much (almost every line)

fv's punches are much better than export's, almost every one of his lines is a good punch

export has better flow, because of his multis
fv's flow isn't that good (line length)

my fav punches are fv's spiked punch and paper mache lines

except for the flow, flow verse takes this battle easily
vote: flow verse

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Voted For: flow verse

Ok this was a decent battle but i thought flow verse had a superior verse:

"Export," you got that right cause i'm about to "ship" you out of RV/
Cat even if you "elevated" your game and got "UPS" u still couldn't "deliver" a line that would impress me/

lol i thought that line was nice even though the punchline felt a lil bit too stretched. 6/10

cat u cat rap so give up on the mic/
dog the "punches" are just like those at college parties "spiked"/

this wasn't very good to be honest i thought the set up
was weak and the punchline was poor 3/10

and even if you rhymes attracted "AIDS" they still wouldn't be "sick"/
and this battle is over cause like "paper mache" you've just been "ripped"/

ok this was an ok closer but nothing special to be completely honest with you. 5/10

overall 14/30 = 47%

Export:

I'm Quick to Slap This Newb That Simply has no clue
Like a Tattoo, This Loss is always gonna be stuck on you

this was a weak opener. you shoulda come with a harder punch. 3/10

The Words that i Spit have Shredded-Yah-Credit
Iam a Soilder, yah A Pussy NewsCaster Embedded

hmm nah too much self glorification.no distinguishable punch. 1/10

Yah Rhyems ant Hot, they Colder then Jack Frost
Only Blood yah spilled was a aids case at Red Cross

weak. 1/10

This Ant Know Battle, Torture of No Prevention
Pay attention, I dont follow the Geneva-Convention

nah this was wack, just a statement, no punch 0/10

overall 5/40 = 12.5%

export you need to elevate and stop using self glorification and statements. learn to develop your punches.

flow verse you also need to develop your punches more so that you can come harder with your verse.

Anyway flow verse gets this one

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Voted For: Export

and even if you rhymes attracted "AIDS" they still wouldn't be "sick"/
and this battle is over cause like "paper mache" you've just been "ripped"/
bit from eminem... "i ripped him like a paper mache"
V/ Export for not biting... flow, if u complain about the vote, then get banned for biting... ;)

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Voted For: Export

Export
I'm Quick to Slap This Newb That Simply has no clue
Like a Tattoo, This Loss is always gonna be stuck on you
Eh, bad similie and bad punch.
The Words that i Spit have Shredded-Yah-Credit
Iam a Soilder, yah A Pussy NewsCaster Embedded
Bad punch.
Yah Rhyems ant Hot, they Colder then Jack Frost
Only Blood yah spilled was a aids case at Red Cross
Bad punch again.
This Ant Know Battle, Torture of No Prevention
Pay attention, I dont follow the Geneva-Convention
What the hell at the random multis.
Study my words, Cause unlike Herbs, there Superb
Horrible closer, self glorification

Overall you need to work on originality and making your punches hit harder. They just have bad concepts, and your "wordplay" is old. Try re wording your concepts into nice punches.

flow verse
Export," you got that right cause i'm about to "ship" you out of RV/
Cat even if you "elevated" your game and got "UPS" u still couldn't "deliver" a line that would impress me/
Last line threw flow off, unoriginal punch.
cat u cat rap so give up on the mic/
dog the "punches" are just like those at college parties "spiked"/
Statement and bad similie. No punch.
and even if you rhymes attracted "AIDS" they still wouldn't be "sick"/
and this battle is over cause like "paper mache" you've just been "ripped"/
*yawn* Unoriginal AIDs punch and last one was blah.

You really need to work on more original concepts. No real punches, just statements. Similies were bad too. Work on making real punches, and real personals.

My vote goes to Export for an attempt at punches, even though they were weak, they did hit somewhat.

v- Export