This was feedback posted for SPuL aka Reckless
 

checkin da polls a real real nice battle dawgs....

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Voted For: Verbal Shoota

Dudes a virgin, yeah he got ''hot text''...when he fourplay in E-Sex
Trigga finger? dudes barely got muscle to shift a key, let alone Flex!
decent start...

Alias for a diffrent day, immitatin celebrities from will smith to Eminem
Ya know its sad...when you start writin, an the Ink runs away from the pen!
ha decent N funny...

Fuck RV's top 10, you aint even number 20,refrain from typin n take a seat
c';mon Spul..you got sickness? HA! you've twice been banned for cheatin!
WOW HE HAS?? i aint even know why did he? biting? GOOD PERSONAL thou

Who you defeatin? it cant be me, son...fake thug never walkin wita Gun
playin pretend parties, smokin e-blunts, but hey...if thats your idea of fun '' ''
aight...

my puns will have you runnin..........l....ike ya playin track an field
only yopu aint pushin the right buttons to have this win Sealed!
aight ending could of been better

u had a good personal, some decent punches, u made me lol flow was good and creativeness was on-point nice drop... 8/10




Just by lookin' at your pic... I can see you need some help
You can brush dirt of your shoulder, but you jus brushin' it back on yourself
ooookay

I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm
Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film
decent meta...

Tryin' to hide your huge lips, cuz even you kno that shit's fat
I would suckerpunch you on your lip, but I'm afraid it would hit me back
ha kinda funny

Tryin' to get over the hump. You gettin' a win? ha! long shot
I mean, how go over the hill, if you've never ever been on the top?
weak..

Posted your pics up, and "straights pics" were all over the place
But when they were talkin' straight, they meant the flatness of your face
ha aight ending,

u had a couple of personals of hes pic, which u shouldnt had focus so much on, some was decent but then it got boring punches was aight and all decent drop...

6/10

aiight uppppppppppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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This was feedback posted for Verbal Shoota
 

just checkin pollz.......cant vote cuz of crew just checkin checkin checkin........

bumpin this..........................................

Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

Dudes a virgin, yeah he got ''hot text''...when he fourplay in E-Sex
Trigga finger? dudes barely got muscle to shift a key, let alone Flex!
horrible open..
Alias for a diffrent day, immitatin celebrities from will smith to Eminem
Ya know its sad...when you start writin, an the Ink runs away from the pen!
ummm NO..
Fuck RV's top 10, you aint even number 20,refrain from typin n take a seat
c';mon Spul..you got sickness? HA! you've twice been banned for cheatin!
^WTF.....LOL
Who you defeatin? it cant be me, son...fake thug never walkin wita Gun
playin pretend parties, smokin e-blunts, but hey...if thats your idea of fun '' ''
Ok..WTF WAs Dat...No Punch
my puns will have you runnin..........l....ike ya playin track an field
only yopu aint pushin the right buttons to have this win Sealed!
^OMG Stop Please Stop

^Elevate

Overall:4.3/10
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Just by lookin' at your pic... I can see you need some help
You can brush dirt of your shoulder, but you jus brushin' it back on yourself
ight ight..
I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm
Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film
LOL...werd
Tryin' to hide your huge lips, cuz even you kno that shit's fat
I would suckerpunch you on your lip, but I'm afraid it would hit me back
[bn]LMFAO!!!...Owned..[/b]
Tryin' to get over the hump. You gettin' a win? ha! long shot
I mean, how go over the hill, if you've never ever been on the top?
Kinda fell off but str8
Posted your pics up, and "straights pics" were all over the place
But when they were talkin' straight, they meant the flatness of your face
LMFAO.....owned...

Nice Verse Overall..

Overall:8.7/10

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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

aight spul took this one easily, verbal you had one good punch and that was about the ink running from the pen, besides that your verse was garbage. Spul not your best shit but you had a few punches. I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm
Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film, was you best line. vote spul

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Voted For: Verbal Shoota

oooh... im a SPuL D/R... j/k...i owed him this RTF from like last week, but anyways...
verbal takes this battle in my opinion... it was a close one tho... at first i thought his verse was gonna be really weak when i read that played opener about four play...but the second line was a decent personal and a funny punch to end it with... the next two lines were pretty good too, i liked the personal about him being banned. even tho the line wasnt all that lyricall dope, it was a decent personal.
I liked SPuL's verse roastin this mofo on his pics... it was pretty funny but i think the punches in Verbal's verse came out on top. it was good personals vs. good personals and Verbal came out on top..
v/ Verbal shoota
dotn worry about RTF bc i'm returning this favor to SPuL

Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

Spul
Just by lookin' at your pic... I can see you need some help
You can brush dirt of your shoulder, but you jus brushin' it back on yourself
Not that big of a punch, but ok.
I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm
Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film
Haha, I liked this. Not a huge punch, but pretty funny.
Tryin' to hide your huge lips, cuz even you kno that shit's fat
I would suckerpunch you on your lip, but I'm afraid it would hit me back
LMAO. Nice punch.
Tryin' to get over the hump. You gettin' a win? ha! long shot
I mean, how go over the hill, if you've never ever been on the top?
Nice punch. Hit hard.
Posted your pics up, and "straights pics" were all over the place
But when they were talkin' straight, they meant the flatness of your face
Haha, nice flip on the otherwise killing aspect of your punches.

Overall, I think you went with trying to be funny, and your punches suffered because of it. Some punches hit hard, some didn't hit at all. Try some more wordplay.

Verbal
Dudes a virgin, yeah he got ''hot text''...when he fourplay in E-Sex
Trigga finger? dudes barely got muscle to shift a key, let alone Flex!
Fake personal and the punch could have been a lot harder. Hit somewhat.
Alias for a diffrent day, immitatin celebrities from will smith to Eminem
Ya know its sad...when you start writin, an the Ink runs away from the pen!
Filler, punch was kind of funny, but just didn't hit really hard.
Fuck RV's top 10, you aint even number 20,refrain from typin n take a seat
c';mon Spul..you got sickness? HA! you've twice been banned for cheatin!
Statement and old personal. Different wording could have made it a good punch.
Who you defeatin? it cant be me, son...fake thug never walkin wita Gun
playin pretend parties, smokin e-blunts, but hey...if thats your idea of fun '' ''
Self glorification, but the punch on the 2nd line hit a little.
my puns will have you runnin..........l....ike ya playin track an field
only yopu aint pushin the right buttons to have this win Sealed!
No. Nothing was right in this bar

Overall, I think that if you had spent more time in your wording, then you could have won this battle easily. But, your punches, though more consistent, didn't hit nearly as hard as Spul's did. I liked the pen line, but that's about it.

My votes goes to Spul for harder hitting punches and personals. Both of you need to work on wordplay though.

v-Spul

Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

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structure-spul
metaz-spul
opener-tie
closer-spul

i wasnt really feeling VS' verse, the rhymes themes were played, i was very uninterested with it after about 6 lines, i felt spuls punches were better n kept me into it, his metaz were far superior to VS'

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