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Black Queen 07-11-05 12:55 PM

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.:F.ate:. 07-12-05 01:58 PM

uuuuuuuupppppppp.................................. ..........................

Static 07-13-05 09:53 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

Ma vote goes to black queen
she had better punches
way better wodplay
and way better structure den Fate

Dirty Nigga 07-14-05 11:09 AM

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 
LOL Damn

y'all went at it like woah

Good drop both of y'all....nice stuff

Uppin this for y'all two

Black Queen 07-14-05 03:37 PM

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I-Cunt-Troll 07-14-05 04:22 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

ok ..........i'mma start this shit off by bein honest...
u got a great chance of beatin me......................
................................in a dick measurin contest!!!!!
^^^2nd line fuked flow...but a decent punch
and if you post before me, all i can say is oh well
your pc SHOULD run faster ..........wit those DSL's!!!!
^^^NO.......this didn't hit
see i really can't front, you make my dick stand erect
but instead of fuck u...i'd rather take a shit on ur chest!!
^^^NO.......not really a punch
i really don't need a closer, shawdy just face facts.......
i beat u with 3 bars like a fuckin face mask
^^^NO......kinda self glorifies

Ur first bar was OK.It actually dissed.I don't know wat the fuck you were tryna to say in the other lines.Run faster with DSL?,shit on her chest?,3bars/face mask?What the fuck is dat?Work on you punches.

Wussy crooks get knuckle-touched, I’ll fuck this bitch ass Fate up
Bust ya up with more uppercuts than an octopus could muster up
^^^C'mon...dun talk bout fighting...DISS!!
Your verse say my word spray will hit you in the back and lymphs
Only way'd you'd get signed... is by unabbreviating your acronymn
^^^OK.......at least an attempt at punch
Speak flows from me like faucets, I’ll leave your doused an’ soakin’
Beat ya from your closet, with a bike wheel, so you'll be 'out-spoken'
^^^Again...this beatin shit.......save that for a gangsta song
Ya spits get's me ‘pissed off’, like condoms flying off a virgin
Ya shit couldn't lift eyebrows if you become a plastic surgeon
^^^OK...............Ur best line

Welll.....ur problem is talkin about beatin him up or something.Just diss the guy out.That all.Fuck tryna look gangsta.Real life it might work.But here....it's no use.But you got the win for actually dissin.......

Vote-Black Queen

.:F.ate:. 07-14-05 08:04 PM

wut a dumbass.....a face mask is tha wiring on a football helmet....facemasks usually have 3 bars.......duh.....wut a herb, at leat he left decent feed tho....uppin

I-Cunt-Troll 07-15-05 08:26 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .:F.ate:.
wut a dumbass.....a face mask is tha wiring on a football helmet....facemasks usually have 3 bars.......duh.....wut a herb, at leat he left decent feed tho....uppin



Callin me a dumbass eh?U wanna battle?

Next time you got on.......PM me givin me an answer!!!!!!

Sixth Sense 07-15-05 06:17 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

Wussy crooks get knuckle-touched, I’ll fuck this bitch ass Fate up
Bust ya up with more uppercuts than an octopus could muster up
aight not a good opener 4/10
Your verse say my word spray will hit you in the back and lymphs
Only way'd you'd get signed... is by unabbreviating your acronymn
ok good line 6/10
Speak flows from me like faucets, I’ll leave your doused an’ soakin’
Beat ya from your closet, with a bike wheel, so you'll be 'out-spoken'
ok nice line here 6/10
Ya spits get's me ‘pissed off’, like condoms flying off a virgin
Ya shit couldn't lift eyebrows if you become a plastic surgeon
......lol nice closer
vs.

ok ..........i'mma start this shit off by bein honest...
u got a great chance of beatin me......................
................................in a dick measurin contest!!!!!
wack.......kinda embarassed ur self.....lol0/10

and if you post before me, all i can say is oh well
your pc SHOULD run faster ..........wit those DSL's!!!!
what who cares......0/10

see i really can't front, you make my dick stand erect
but instead of fuck u...i'd rather take a shit on ur chest!!
what is this man......0/10
i really don't need a closer, shawdy just face facts.......
i beat u with 3 bars like a fuckin face mask
still dont kno man.....0/10

damn what a weak battle here BQ did aight here u kno some good lines but didnt pack alot of damga just needed more delivery and just some more vocab to make interesting but fate ur verse was wack man......really no offense but need elevation to the maxed check the tutorials....fo real aight ur verse had nothin jsut straight nothin really so....BQ takes this ez .......cuz of the punches and lines and cuz fate didnt come hard.......

C-Hood 07-15-05 07:25 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

ok ..........i'mma start this shit off by bein honest...
u got a great chance of beatin me......................
................................in a dick measurin contest!!!!!
HAHA
and if you post before me, all i can say is oh well
your pc SHOULD run faster ..........wit those DSL's!!!!
OO SHIT NICE
see i really can't front, you make my dick stand erect
but instead of fuck u...i'd rather take a shit on ur chest!!
THAT IS JUS NASTY
i really don't need a closer, shawdy just face facts.......
i beat u with 3 bars like a fuckin face mask
OK


BREAKDOWN-NICE VERSE....HAD ME ROLLIN....HAHA CAN'T REALLY SAY THAT MUCH CUZ IT WAS SO SHORT



Wussy crooks get knuckle-touched, I’ll fuck this bitch ass Fate up
Bust ya up with more uppercuts than an octopus could muster up
OK
Your verse say my word spray will hit you in the back and lymphs
Only way'd you'd get signed... is by unabbreviating your acronymn
NICE
Speak flows from me like faucets, I’ll leave your doused an’ soakin’
Beat ya from your closet, with a bike wheel, so you'll be 'out-spoken'
OO SHIT...HAHA
Ya spits get's me ‘pissed off’, like condoms flying off a virgin
Ya shit couldn't lift eyebrows if you become a plastic surgeon
OK I SEE YOU


BREAKDOWN-REAL NICE VERSE...DIDN'T FALL OFF ANYWHERE THROUGH OUT IT...HAD A LIL COMPLEXITY IN THERE WIT THE OUT-SPOKEN...

VOTE GOES TO BLACK QUEEN JUST BECAUSE SHE GAVE ME MORE...BUT NICE BATTLE


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