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ye a real nice song dawg im happy to see us all standin together at this moment!!!!

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yo kid that was real dedication i feel you just like what happen to us in 9-11
i feel you on that kid the beat was tight words were heart felt off the chain
all you need now is a new mic

Lol yeah thanks loads dawg..will be gettin that mic soon

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dat u pickin da mic up on da intro??? intro is ite... bit bland n emotionless in ya voice... nice beat.. u need to vget a stand for ya mic n pull it back from ur mouth.... dats y its fuzzy... ya flow is abit choppy actually its really choppy.. emotion lacks abit delivery sounds abit stuttery... ur lines ir too long structure ur verse round da beat... its cool n its nice u did a dedication just bein real wit u on da actual song makin

ight listenin as i type.....


quality is not good at all which brings your music right down..... emotion is ight, lyrics are nice, very thoughtful i actually like this beat is banging.... just your quality and your pops which bring this down r.i.p everyone involved.... keep droppin em man pz

thanks man....quality will be better when i get my new mic