uppin in here man thanx for getting his vote out of here

Voted For: STAY FOCUS

Flow- Philosopher- MC had consistent flow, Focus's line lengths were way off, both did a good job rhyming

Punches- Focus- Focus had lots of wordplay in his punches, and none of MCs hit very hard.

Multies- Philosopher- MC wins this hands down- tons of multies, Focus barely had any

Vocab- Philosopher- Neither had much vocab, but i say MC has the edge here, mainly because focus said "cat" at the beginning of three lines

Originality- Focus- Focus had lots of wordplay, MCs disses were very basic

Personals- Focus- I really like the Harvard punch, MC didnt have any good personals

Opening- Philosopher- MC hits with a punch right away, SF's "yo check it" isnt very good

Closing- Even- neither closes the battle well

Vote- Focus- good wordplay, punches

This was feedback posted for STAY FOCUS
 

u was good but not dat good

can we get some votes in here drop a link and ill repay the favor

uppin in here need some votes.........................

uppin.............................................

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drop a link

someone vote on this please . .. thankyou

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drop a link

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

I vote for MC:Philosopher due to the fact he had better personals,punches and worplay.


Focus, yours wasnt too bad its just that your concepts were all played, you need to come with more original concepts and learn better punches.

NO HATE< RTF IN 3 DAYS OR THIS GETS DQ'ED!!

uppin for votes...................................

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

look man its like dis
struture=Mc
meta=none
personals=Mc
punches=Mc
creativity-MC
thats how it goes
good drop to both of yall

uppin drop a link and we will return the honest vote right focus

bumpping this battle up need to finish it so i can get an open slot