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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

aight man this was a close battle to me.
fucous: im a little disappointed man u got potential dwg u did good but i thought your punches could have been harder and u could have had more personals. not saying u did bad but saying u could have done better.nice closer

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lawless: you did good also your punches were okay could have been harder also. u hadmore and they were eventually harder than focused. u had like one or two personals also.
your punches won this battle for me man

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from your last few battles this your best 1 yet keep it up man

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

Nice battle going on here

Lawless:::
He bluffin ya see... I don't give nuttin' for free/
you gotta be a LifeStyle condom... other wise you ain't fuckin' wit me
Sick opening there

Law... LAWLESS we one in the same/
talk shit and see ya life flash before ya eyes like the pac pics under my name/
nice closure

Best Punch:::
yea yo raps weak c'mon you know that's sweet/
I bet even if you had a Old Miami Jersey you still couldn't 'throwback heat'/

Weakest punch:::
am I worried not at all/
not when I can put feet to this nigga like he was a Select Soccerball/

SF:::
He really wants to be battle me? Yo check it. . .
Kid even if you were named “Hennessey” you wouldn’t have a shot/
Very weak opening--Didnt even rhyme

I know you hate me cause I’m flawless/
Cat this battle is over— anarchy spread -- you could say I just made RV “lawless”
Again a very weak closing--not that hard of a punch

Best Punch:::
Its not your fault the same mentality u have with “dicks” you bring it to verse/
Lawless thinks the more he “sucks” the higher the rank he will get on RapVerse/

Weakest Punch:::
I am a true freestyle so my lines are “fresh” yours just starting to “rot”/
Come on people even if lawless was a “backwards” poet he still couldn’t write “in-verse”/
Didnt ven rhyme( let down )

Opening: Law
Closing: Focus
Punches: Law
Multis: None
Structure: None
Rhyming Skills: Both
Verbal Usage: Law







Overall Vote: Lawless

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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

Punches-Lawless...mainly because more lines and shit.Focus...next time...try to have just as much lines as oppenent.Gotta match up to them

Flow-Lawless...Focus...read the tutorials.You can't go having a line with 20 words then a line with 4.UNless you have multis though...which you didn't.

Multi-Neither.

Creativity-Lawless.....Focus had some played lines

Personals-Both of you elevate greatly in this catergory

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i think you had a great drop forcus . . . but Lawless (Hs) drop more lines which might be to ur disadvantage. . . good luck man . . . good battle tho . . both of you had good drops. . . good luck to both keep writing . . .

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