uppin this...lets get this over with

uppin.........can we get some more votes up in here

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well i think u both came wack but i thik u won lol at the other kid and zoo tamin a lion lol wtf

lol..iight if dats what u think...uppin

uppin............................................. ..................

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you got this becuz of the of the punches and the rhymes

uppin fo sum votes
.....hollah bac n tell us who whopped sum ass

Voted For: ol'dirtymexican

after dis battle people gon see whos worse
cuz sexin ya bitch iz tha only way u "cumin" first
4..cum lines are played.
see ya play tough but really got no guts
n ya like a pack a plain m & m's...no nuts
5...good..but 1st line sounded too familar...
who u kiddin u aint "rhym sicc"
u jus jus git told dat cuz all day u ride dick
4...too basic
watch it cuz im comin at u like jay did nas
wit punches dat burn like cuban cigars
3...nas/jay lines are played now...and the 2nd line itself wuz a self glorifing
dis battle ova i aint gotta spit no mo
cuz there aint no way im losin 2 dis homo
3..gay is played

It's Like Im "roller Skatin" Cause Nigga I Be "rollin-on-blades"
Fuck With Me, Ill Cut U Up, Got So Many Knives U Would Think I Was A Maid
2...no punch...just threats
U Claim Yo Occupation Is Bein A "hustla", Now Nigga Stop Lyin.
I Seen Yo Crusty Ass At Tha Zoo Tamin A Wild Ass Lion.
1...wtf?...this is really whack..sorry.
U Right About Yo Name Cause U Is Ol' And Dirty.
U Already Look Like U Bout One-thirty.(130)
2....130????...and sayin he's ol' 'n dirty isn't gonna diss him..he picked that name himself
When I Spit, I Jus Spit Wat Comes 2 My Mind.
But Unlike U, When U Spit It's Crap Cause It Comes 2rm Yo Behind.
3....whack
I Spit Mad Fire, But U, U Spit Mad Breaze.
My Words Come Out Burnin, Yours Jus Come Out And Freeze.
3.....weak..weak..weak

One sided battle.
Ol' dirty mexican got this by far.
SicC...you had lines,like that 1st bar,that didn't diss.Sayin u got knives like a miad isn't gonna diss him.And why,in the 2nd bar,did you call him a lion?..That shit just seemed random...too random.And then you claim he's ol' n dirty...when he picked the name..so why would it offend?

Vote-Mexican
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sum one git me one more vote n put this guy out his misery

Voted For: ol'dirtymexican

Ol'DirtyMexican

after dis battle people gon see whos worse
cuz sexin ya bitch iz tha only way u "cumin" first
One of the most played concepts ever..
see ya play tough but really got no guts
n ya like a pack a plain m & m's...no nuts
Funny.. but played..
who u kiddin u aint "rhym sicc"
u jus jus git told dat cuz all day u ride dick
Nah..
watch it cuz im comin at u like jay did nas
wit punches dat burn like cuban cigars
Not a punch..
dis battle ova i aint gotta spit no mo
cuz there aint no way im losin 2 dis homo
Didn't connect..

RhymnSicC

It's Like Im "roller Skatin" Cause Nigga I Be "rollin-on-blades"
Fuck With Me, Ill Cut U Up, Got So Many Knives U Would Think I Was A Maid
Not a punch..
U Claim Yo Occupation Is Bein A "hustla", Now Nigga Stop Lyin.
I Seen Yo Crusty Ass At Tha Zoo Tamin A Wild Ass Lion.
Nope..
U Right About Yo Name Cause U Is Ol' And Dirty.
U Already Look Like U Bout One-thirty.(130)
Nah..
When I Spit, I Jus Spit Wat Comes 2 My Mind.
But Unlike U, When U Spit It's Crap Cause It Comes 2rm Yo Behind.
Didn't connect..
I Spit Mad Fire, But U, U Spit Mad Breaze.
My Words Come Out Burnin, Yours Jus Come Out And Freeze.
Played..

Overall, this battle wasn't that good. There was a lot of played lines between both verses (e.g. cummin/first, burnin/freeze), but when it comes down to it, Ol'DirtyMexican had more punches. RhymnSicC only had a few punches and none of them connected, whereas Mexican had quite a few punches mixed in with some wordplay. So, in conclusion, ol'dirtymexican gets my vote for attempting more punches and wordplay.

Vote - ol'dirtymexican

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Voted For: ol'dirtymexican

v/ dirty mexican

rhym- you stretched some lines which really looks bad. also your punches weren't fresh, n some lines were filler.

mexican- you had an ight verse, some lines were played also but it was better than rhyms verse, also kept it simple with the structure in nice short lines, dope.

return the favor- me vs. lextownkillaz

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Feeling this..if

odm had a better set up n his punches edged but RS had better multis n wordplay...so it was pretty close to a tie but odm edged by a bit..!

Voted For: RhymnSicC

ok this was a realli realli realli weak ass battle...

rhymnsicc - you had some Weak ass lines!!! but as it went on it got a bit better, u needa use personals, and more hard hittin punches, you need to work on ur vocab and ur structure cause some yo shit was stretched like a pornstar man.. but u had some original shit.. so its all gud...

olDM - you had the most played verse ever... cum, sex, nuts are all played sooo fuckin much that i hate reading verses that contain that shit, you need to work on ur punches, flow and structure, this was a very week battle..but RS gets the win...

vote - RS

Voted For: ol'dirtymexican

sicC's verse was just wack and half of it wassn't even directed at Mex... Mex came mad simply with his but every punch he threw beat anything that SicC said at all... he also had the better structure, closer, and openner....

Openner: Mex
Closer: Mex
Punches: Mex
Personals: Nothing I could varify, worth speaking on
Creativity: Mex
Complexity: Mex
Structure: Mex

Vote: ol'dirtymexican