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Voted For: Young Dollar

im giving it to u ur personals were really good
flow was good id say work on ur vocabs and metas thats about it
x work on ur personals flow was good punches were kinda played a few good ones though work on creativity

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Voted For: Young Dollar

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RTF HERE Y.D OR VOTE WILL BE REMOVED ^

Xceed you my dog, but Y.D Got you beat, sorry man

X:
Not a bad verse, you tried goin all out an use more lines than your oppenent, but some of the bars seemed a lil forced because of that...

punches was aight, that babe pig in the city shit was kinda corny tho.....wordplay could use a litle elevation, an up the vocab....but still, it was a nice verse, you was unlucky to lose

Y.D:
Decent drop....one of your better verses man, your elevating alot, thats always good.....lol

But yeah, punches hit alot harder, they seemed more complex, an the wordplay wasnt that good, but it was better...try addin a few multies in the bars too improve your flow....an you'll be good to go man!

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Peace out good job y'all

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Voted For: Young Dollar

neither one of you needed to explain y'all bars... (X)eed you fell off towards the end of your verse.. your best bars were:

Like Donald Trump says ....... "dollar you're fired"
ooooops i made a mistake the kid wasnt even hired
see you comin at me is like the dollar witout the sign
the kid's "bankrupt" i "loaned" him the verse hes about to type

^^they were str8, bars..

Young Dollar..
don't explain each bar, your concepts were easy to get.. xcept for the first one, cuz i didn't know he was battling 4fil.. try to slim the expl. list next time. your best bars were:

Ya claim you Exeed all expectations when it comes to skill
But when it comes to rap battles ya couldnt come up to 4Fil

N you just some fat boy in ya mommas basement out of the states
Get liposucktion,Mix wit coke,smuggel it in,still cant slang ya weight

Like you got black bags to your lips, Talkin trash aint gonna get that Far
Because for Dollar, I got you on Smash, Like broken cars at a Junk Yard

^nice bars, but they started to get stretched the further you got into your verse. i thought your lines were more hard hitting and had better personals within.

good luck to both

v/ Young Dollar

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