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Voted For: E.C

EC destroyed Opt1k in this battle in my honest opinion.
EC came a whole lot stronger than Op in every aspect.
Although in a few bars ECs verse wasn't all that at all it was enough to take Op out.

Raw must be blind, recuiting you! now i know its an easy win,
coz you suck verbals dick so much your stuck wit a cheesy grin,

lol kinda nasty n shit but still a decent punch 7/10

you can't be a skater, coz boarders arn't supposed to be blind,
but you could play with sand paper to say that u stay on the grind,

so-so, nothin special 4/10

i got this locked.......... opt1k has got no other choice but to flee,
ill run circles around you to say i left you shook like the florida keyes,

once again nothing special but still aite 4/10

so your the hot new talent........ but everyone has heard it before,
now ill just straighten you out....... like u was a hot ironing board,

below-average punch 3/10

i respect your judgement on r.a.w it takes alot to make a man,
but robbing shit out of hardwarwe stores is the only time u take a stand,

ok closer 5/10

overall 23/50

Opt1k's verse:

got my rap game up homie it's essential.
if ya feel i disrespected you good i ment 2.

garbage opener to be honest 0/10

got my rap game up homie it's essential.
if ya feel i disrespected you good i ment 2.

i smell self glorification in that bar so NO 0/10

on the scale home im unique wit my lyrics
stylez very opposite but ur's,copy written generic

very weak punch indeed 1/10

true artist blowin the scene and this battle
can't even handle half of me u i will dismantle

first lines self glorification again, weak punchline 1/10

we gettin voted for the illest posted skill
may the best man win,haha...dont worry i will........

weaker than weak closer last line made you look wack. 1/10

overall 3/50

this was one sided EC took this one


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~peace~

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Voted For: E.C

opt1k
got my rap game up homie it's essential.
if ya feel i disrespected you good i ment 2.
No punch.
i kill whack mc's like you,my job,true lyricist
kill all in my path,crime scene,no witnessess
No punch. I do something line.
on the scale home im unique wit my lyrics
stylez very opposite but ur's,copy written generic.
Punch attempt but it missed. Self glorification.
true artist blowin the scene and this battle
can't even handle half of me u i will dismantle
No punch and self glorification.
we gettin voted for the illest posted skill
may the best man win,haha...dont worry i will........
No punch and self glorification.

You had one attempt at a punch, how did you get in a crew, seriously? Work on making REAL punches and personals. You self glorify too much.

E.C
Raw must be blind, recuiting you! now i know its an easy win,
coz you suck verbals dick so much your stuck wit a cheesy grin,
Not that good of a punch.
you can't be a skater, coz boarders arn't supposed to be blind,
but you could play with sand paper to say that u stay on the grind,
Ehh, not liking this.
i got this locked.......... opt1k has got no other choice but to flee,
ill run circles around you to say i left you shook like the florida keyes,
No, bad punch.
so your the hot new talent........ but everyone has heard it before,
now ill just straighten you out....... like u was a hot ironing board,
Bad similie.
i respect your judgement on r.a.w it takes alot to make a man,
but robbing shit out of hardwarwe stores is the only time u take a stand,
Blah punch.

Overall, not a very good verse, but you did throw punches so ya. Work on making real personals and try to include better wordplay. Try more original similies too.

Vote goes to E.C for actually having punches.

v-E.C

Voted For: E.C

u had better personals punches ur flow was good and ur structure was better up ur vocab and throw in some more personals
optik u had no good punches work on them and ur flow was way too basic along with ur structure
u took this easily
good battle