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I-Cunt-Troll 07-15-05 07:48 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by (X)eed
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ man... thnx 4 votin aiight... agreed on my battle and his..but stop askin peepz to like forcefully vote on ur battle



Wtf man???
It hard enough to get votes on this site.If we voted in someone's battle...they outta vote in ours.As long as it's honestly.Sometimes....if we don't force...we don't get them to vote.It's mandatory to force......

(X)eed 07-15-05 07:54 AM

^^^^^
fair nuff

blackfrostbite 07-15-05 09:21 AM

Quote:
yo cuz,leave da block,you a pest in da streets/
killin' you wit dis will be part of 4 fillin my destiny/
^^That nice to know ya wanna kill him & all....but where da punch?

wat the fuck,it means imma kill him lyrically and dat will be part of destiny,me beatin him,and him losin fag! fuck yall, yall don't know how to fuckin vote,dis forum is fuckin whack

I-Cunt-Troll 07-15-05 09:24 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by blackfrostbite
wat the fuck,it means imma kill him lyrically and dat will be part of destiny,me beatin him,and him losin fag! fuck yall, yall don't know how to fuckin vote,dis forum is fuckin whack



So wat...it still whack.U still self glorifing urself.Why don't you make an Open Mic sayin how you'll lyrically murder?
This a battle.....throw punches only....that all.

C-Hood 07-15-05 09:34 AM

Voted For: 4fil

yo cuz,leave da block,you a pest in da streets/
killin' you wit dis will be part of 4 fillin my destiny/
ok
yo you ain't a sindicator of crime/
how can you be in da streets plottin' when you can't write a decent rhyme/
hell naw...
look homie im more of a killer dan you need an example/
check out how im makin you commit suicide wit dis one rhyme,and dis ain't even da preamble/
no...second line was longer then my dick...(that's long)
ya life ya gamble,when ya tuoch mics wit me/
cuz what da fight seems to be,will be over within a mintue,better believe me
ummmm...ok



breakdown-verse wasn't really hittin...some punches were thrown but seemed like they were thrown by a blind man...didn't really have any complexity...should have done you reserach and looked and saw tha you would have to bring yo A game wit dis guy...nice drop none the less




The boys running and hiding.......... as if Will-a-peer just kissed him
With a Record of 1-0........... the only person he beat was the system
haha
Fucked up ugly, slimey and beat.......... Yeah i'm talking bout your head
I'll make this pussie bloddy........... and i'm winning this battle period
nice...but it didn't really rhyme
The only time your dope......... is when you put those drugs into effect
It's in his name to bite........... and the coward went and stole my accept
ok
It must have been cold when you got frostbite.. and actually quite scary
seeing this ugly fruit around believing somebody's gonna pop his cherry
ok


breakdown-nice verse...like how you had that word play in there...punches were thrown and landed...had one personal which hit...pretty decent verse.

blackfrostbite 07-15-05 09:35 AM

icuntroll, good point man-----
mah bad yall, just please learn how to vote
cuz in mah battle vs conflict some dude i forgot
call himself votin fo conflict but didn't say
why,so how can i improve if i don't wat to
improve?

blackfrostbite 07-15-05 09:36 AM

it was dat homie optik,as a matter of fact im battlin dat fool too

Daubs 07-15-05 11:04 AM

This was feedback posted for 4fil
 
WOW, voted for him for using punches..................

4fil 07-15-05 07:47 PM

uppin............

blackfrostbite 07-15-05 08:27 PM

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vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvooooooooooooooooooooooooooott ttttttttttteeeeeerrrrrrrssssssss
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chris Stylez 07-15-05 09:41 PM

Voted For: 4fil

Opinion. This was a EZ win in my view 4Fil came alot harder.....nice vocab and better punches and structure.BFB came extremely weak had alright vocab ut punches wasnt workin much less his structure

Vocab-Tie both had nice vocab
Flow-4Fil was easier to read threw so he takes it
Structure-4Fil had it cuz everything matched up
Punches-4FIl he had better and harder punches
Personals-Both hand personals but 4Fil put em in words better
Metas-both was alright

Winner-4fil

Advice-4FIl keep it bangin and always room for improvement
Advice-Blackfrostbite come harder on your punches and work on your structure.Read ya first a couple of times before dropping it making sure it sounds right. and makes sure your post is neat and shit alright.

Overal Battle- 7/10


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