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C-Hood 07-15-05 05:55 PM

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

this punk callin me out actin like a real hard nigga
bitch bow muhfuka,disgrace 2 ur crew,mr.one hit wondea
YOU ARE JUST JOKIN RIGHT
puttin ill matic lines demolishin wit punch lines.
i spit a glock sideways rippin ya apart i never drop my eye
I GUESS YOU AREN'T


BREAKDOWN-LINES DIDN'T EVEN RHYME...I HOPE THAT YOU WEREN'T EXPECTIN TO WIN...ALL BARZ HAD TO DO WAS RHYME AND HE WOULD HAVE WON...SERIOUS ELEVATION NEEDED



This fag thinks he's dope? Well I'm stopping the confusion
Cuz him being ill, well thats just one of "Opt1kals illusions"
HAHA NICE*
Dude acts like he's the shit, but forreal, he's softer than pillow's be
So I'll "Bash His Brains With A Guitar"......................................
That's what I call "Putting Thoughts To A Melody!!!!!!!" *
HAHA NICE


BREAKDOWN-WASN'T REALLY CLOSE AT ALL...TWO PUNCHES...WELL HAYMAKERS THROWN AND LANDED SO SWEET LIKE...CAN'T REALLY SAY MUCH MORE*

Da King 07-15-05 05:59 PM

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Black magik won this shit hands down. way betta punches and his shit ryhmed. optikal you fucking suck.

parasite 07-15-05 06:57 PM

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

BOS:

Good verse fam it was short but sweet. Personals hit, and the punches were hard and connected.

Opt1k:

Yo verse wuz wack dogg. Keep elevating

.Barz Of Steel. 07-15-05 10:43 PM

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morse code 07-16-05 12:27 AM

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

iight ight barz dominated inm this battle...

heres the breakdown

punches:barz
personals:barz
werdplay:barz
structure:barz

barz of steel- your verse was fuckin nice, just like the heading said "short and sweet"...nice play on his name, also had originality in the punches...nice

opt1k: no hate dawg but sumof your shit didnt even rhymed...the punches wer...well.. there werent any...

barz-
This fag thinks he's dope? Well I'm stopping the confusion
Cuz him being ill, well thats just one of "Opt1kals illusions" *
7.5/10...first line was a cross between filler an leader...but dope punch in the end
Dude acts like he's the shit, but forreal, he's softer than pillow's be
So I'll "Bash His Brains With A Guitar"......................................
That's what I call "Putting Thoughts To A Melody!!!!!!!" **
9/10...dopeness, both lines had punches and were original

op1k

this punk callin me out actin like a real hard nigga
bitch bow muhfuka,disgrace 2 ur crew,mr.one hit wondea
1/10..uhhh, no comment
puttin ill matic lines demolishin wit punch lines.
i spit a glock sideways rippin ya apart i never drop my eye.
2/10...uhhh, a bit better

my vote goes to barz of steel

.Barz Of Steel. 07-16-05 01:53 AM

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.Barz Of Steel. 07-16-05 05:05 AM

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