uppin this shit homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin this........................................

this joint was ok. some verses were better than others. yall need to work on puttin more punches in ya verse or some multies or somethin so its not as bland ya feel me.

one mic's best bar
I just cock back, fire, then release my grip
Everybody gets shocked, like hearin Jesus spit
^nice solid bar, i was feelin that one

opt1k's best bar
nigga front the musik bitch i'll have ya ass shot
cuz our lyrics kill mc's,are beatz be breakin speaker wattz
^this was ok pretty basik tho. ya need to work on ya flow

Lyrical mage best bar
I sit here slow as molasses writing freestyles while time passes And after a battle I always rise up like a phoenix from its ashes
^you ha dthe best vocab but your flow n structure were all over the place

knaledg1 best bar
Hea I go ready to blow like a lethal weapon,
I'll knock yer' ass out like a game of Tekken,
^ i liked this bar jsut cuz i aint heard Tekken in a while n it was a good bar too tho

overall this coulda been alot stronger i give it a 6/10 but its was decent
returnt he favor. Links in the sIG

^^ haha man WERD and to be honest man ive elevated alot hiomie real so peep all my OM's i used to be opt1k now im shodown i changed my name but yea THANKS..........



ayo UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yer man thanks for that feedback, appreciate it. uppin this...................

link:-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204846

uppin this shit...................................

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204195

Accept gifts and that help uplift my pride best take this
As true don’t let fakes twist you because stress just piss
Me off, never blunder fake and silly try undertake responsibility
got a committee report now in a shitty court need some agility
ready to say yes to charges stay best in garages because
i fix cars and mix bazaar drink

okkkkkkkkkk, that didnt make any sense................

uppin this anywayz..........

uppin this........................................

this was gay... you had NOTHING Witty or even funny. For TOPICAL, you had NO imagry and ya didnt have a good rhyme scheme.... this was bad... no offence, call me out or what ever, but it was bad...

fair enough then, if you think that way, but if you wanna post here and make feedback, make it GUD. uppin this......

MAN TELL THAT HOMIE To shut the fuck up!?!?!?!?!?!


this OM was old this was when we started out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nigga wanna see skillz battle me in a topical.....................


set it up

heres the rules bitch


no crew votes
no hate votes
no favor votes


2 days drop.................1 day check in cuz i got work

the topic punk bitches hatin on a niggas work!!!!!!!

yo, uppin this shit...................................

where that bitch at MAN!!!!!