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Voted For: Wes City

Wes City.....
ya whole verse was good.... ya closer could of been a little bit better, ya closer was good and funny as hell! Each bar was hard hittin' and creative. this is some good shit ya spit right here.... really there was no filler to this, each setup line went with the punchline, very good here

%85/100
best line:
I don’t smoke weed but the L you will taste
Watchin the breast stroke is your idea of 2nd base

!Impact!
sorry but almost your whole verse was pretty much self-glory, ya have to get use to spittin bars but tweakin them so they aren't self glory... also seperating the bars ruins the flow of verse.... sorry man

%70/100
best line:
Coz i might eat you i can make a meal of ice/
And if i eat yah it's enough to feed me twice/


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