Voted For: Mimesis

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rtf here Mim ^

Sorry Black, you my homeboy, but Mim has you here..

Black:
Some decent hits in the verse, openener was a lil forced on the wordplay of ''Mim sis'...wasnt feelin that, the maybe in motnhs elevation line was hot, nice creativity there

Overall ya verse was aight, I can see that your lyrical content is proll better suited too audios...still a straight drop, against most other textcees on here, you would of got the win, but Mim took it....Sorry man


Mim:
Nice verse, alot more complex with the text, better structured verse, nice disses throughout, each bar hit a mark with the punches....wordplay cant be faulted neither...You definately got the win homie....Good job y'all...Nice battle

This aint for pink slip tho is it?...'cause Black is reppin RAW....

rtf tho Mim....or vote will be removed .....(sorry to sound like an asshole but you know how hard it is to get good honest votes)

Peace an uppin for y'all...

I'll hit your battle up now, Verb..

Word.

Upping.

verbal, im in 2 of the same crews that spul is in.

get me another link or something.

Voted For: Mimesis

jus checkin' why my name is spoken in this biznatch. but mimesis killed it anyways ~_~

word! plus we brothers like pancakes nah mean? :shoot:

Voted For: Mimesis

v/mim

not great but beta here, thought ya first bar was pretty dope nice original concept but wasn't feelin the 2nd much, the fosters line was nice and you came with a gud finisher

black I wasn't feelin much of ya stuff here, thought you had a chance after readin mims cos it wasn't his best but ur punches were abit forced to me

pz