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Voted For: E.C

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=198924
RTF HERE E.C OR VOTE WILL BE REMOVED.

Souljah:
Pretty decent, your elevating alot....Starting to structure ya bars like a tru rv head LOL...Set up lines, then the pun, thats the way it is homie, good drop tho...Few decent hits, nothin too special in ya wordplay, an personals could of been more hard hittin an relivent you know? straight drop tho...keep doin ya thing

E.C:
Decent drop, not one of your best, but you prolly did enough to get the win, well you did enough to get my vote at least

Wordplay within your punches still needs elevation, but other then that, ya verses cant be faulted......vocab goes too souljah, but thats not really important if the puns an personals aint there....so E.C Gets my vote

RTF E.C Or vote will be removed, links at the top of my vote.

Uppin this for y'all two..

it says page cannot be found.... leave another link of summet

Voted For: E.C

good good...


Bump my skills in battles, we all know souljah wants to hire/higher me,
unkown on rapverse... thats why's he's part of a secret society,
ur opening was koo' but needed a bit of elevation

ill come simple and still end ta text, whats he believin?,
coz E.C'll leave him all shuck up.................. like shakin stevens,
Again you needed to elevate just a tiny bit

multis: both
Punches: E.C
Verbal skills: Both
Rhyming skiils: both

and also soulja u came on top but needed a bit of elevation......

Vote: E.C

uppin for more votes............................................. ...

that shit ain't explained. you barely analysed EC's verse.
and you sure as hell didn't analyse mine.....

Ya know what.....set up a battle against me with a day's check in if you think you're in a position to tell me and EC to elevate

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This was feedback posted for Souljah
 

nice attle cant vote but just checkin polllllzzzzzz

Voted For: E.C

You punch like a blind man....never hittin the spot,
If you caught an STD and burned when you pee........
..................thats the only time your "shit" would ever be hot,
4...weak, a played concept in both lines and the 2nd part was stretched to fuck.
Lyrically your flow's lame borderin on wack,
They slack like a fat cat stoppin after 2 jumpin jacks,
5...better, i guess it was mildly funny but rushed and if re-worded cud be better.
Lyrically you're "Easily Conquered".....that explains your name,
I could still outsmart this cat with exit wounds in my brain,
5...2nd line was aight, the first line with the play on his name was not all that good or original.
You're an insult to the game, for real you make me yawn,
Like Lil Bow Wow's backside your flow will get torn,
5...again, first line was wack, 2nd line had slight humour to it but the affect was lost by the setup.
You could only get your props from the use of sarcasm,
Your flow's like watchin a geek trip over his own feet.............................
..............and fall on his face......every one laughs at em
5...ok bar, only problem is that the 2nd line is once again stretched to fuck.

OVERALL: 24/50


Bump my skills in battles, we all know souljah wants to hire/higher me,
unkown on rapverse... thats why's he's part of a secret society,
5...an ok play off his crew name, and a slight bit of wordplay.
take me on? i always thought that your style was confusing,
but i need to tell you that you never get respected for losing,
5...getting to be a played concept now, also not delivered as good as it cud be.
stupid bitch, u wanna write raps.................. but it's a shame,
your a 17 year old student and you cant even spell your name,
4...weak, c'mon E.C you know that punches on mispelt names are played and gay.
i souled ya/souljah, but when he texts, he suffers from a curse,
got the name darkman, coz no light ever shines on ya verse,
6...i actually like this, a bit of wordplay on his name and an ok punch in the 2nd line.
ill come simple and still end ta text, whats he believin?,
coz E.C'll leave him all shuck up.................. like shakin stevens,
6...again a decent bar, the concept in the 2nd line was quite original and funny, cud still be improved though.

OVERALL: 26/50

close battle, souljah had potentially good punches but he ruined them, either with a wack setup and ok punch or ok setup and wack punch. E.C had a couple of decent bars at the end and that is what won the battle for him. he did have some played concepts but still came more consistent than souljah.

V/ - E.C

RTF!!! battle links in my sig....hit the marv battle plz!!

Voted For: E.C

V/Ec......this was a good battle but e came wit better punchs an personals that were original an not played wit good wordplay an structure.....Souljah u had an aight verse u fell off in alot of ur punchs to basic u need to work on that an ur wordplay....No Hate.......RETURN THE FAVOR...(or I'll get this vote removed an u'll never get an honest vote from me agian)
Opener=E
Closer=E
Vocab=E
Punchs=E
Multi's=Tie
Personals=E
Wordplay=E
Structure=Tie
Overall=EC

^^ leave a link man............................................