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Left Feed On RB's One So Doing It Here Good Shit Man Had Nice Shit And On And On Same As Rb Lols Holla
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once again lol another greAT o/m by symbol........u stepped iit up this time......10/10 deff. good emotion good flow multis and vocab were stilll just ok..but nothing to worry about keep progressin again....lol and rtf on myo/m give me honest feedback ill take it...peace
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it was a good read because of the emotion you put into it....you could have upped the vocab a lot more and also come more complex at times.....and try not to stretch your lines to much....overall tho a good concept to use and i loved the way you broke it down beginning with your thoughts at the beginning and ending it with you.........good job
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