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Voted For: Premanition
Wayne: I Bomb-Geeks with Strong-Speaks that'z bound to Hit prem Harder than Concrete, son your beyond-weak...// ^^no 1/10 My "Led-Is-Wreckless" each Verse Dispersed Keepin son Dead-and-Breathless..Precision Incisions from "Head-to-Necklace" leave u "Ejectin-Breakfast"...// ok..check this... ^^decent 4/10 attack-with-a-force-above-average.. so when I pile-drive you from a mile-high you'll land-in-the-core-of-the-planet...// ^^no 2/10 I'm labeled-as-flagrant.. watch me discard-your-jaw-bitch with a martial-arts-kick when your face lays-on-the-pavement...// ^^decent 4/10 All of your lettering's-wasted on this veteran's-flagrance.. I'll superglue your lips and paste them to leprosy-patients...//(eww) ^^funny 5/10 Mc nice when he writes? Nah...bout to get Slayed twice, I'm cold enuff 2 FREEZE HIS DOME -N- punch'm in the head just to "BREAK THE ICE"...// ^^good meta 6/10 Take his life and get RID-OF-THE-CORPSE, smack this PITIFUL-WHORE wit CRITICAL-FORCE, my 'delivery got this "Newbie Kid" hooked' like AMBILLICAL-CORDS...// ^^dope 7/10 hit you in "spanish",send "rockets" in your "culo",make him switch his name from scam and take a trip to "pluto"...// ^^ehh 2/10 Overall: 31/80 (39%) Premanition: “..Dope? Shit! you can quote that I ‘beg’ to differ..” Down on two like ya mother, but her legs were stiffer ^^ehh 3/10 Kid get a grip you couldn’t be sick if ya brains hurled Eatin from a bin, that’s like an insight to ‘waynes world’ ^^decent 5/10 kid don’t stress, I blame ya girl for them stretched rhymes cos them overweight stretch lines are bound to effect minds ^^ehh 3/10 damn just drop the act bitch and pick up your reality you bout as much a ‘hot sauce’ as Williams was a casualty (*) ^^dope bar 8/10 this verse will serve you with flows that ‘paste’ to impress & you beta hope its ‘spreadable’ so you can taste the success ^^lol good closer 6/10 Overall: 25/50 (50%) Vote: Premanition Return the favor with an honest vote on any battle in my sig or this vote will get removed. |
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Voted For: Premanition
. “..Dope? Shit! you can quote that I ‘beg’ to differ..” Down on two like ya mother, but her legs were stiffer ^Nice punch started strong^ Kid get a grip you couldn’t be sick if ya brains hurled Eatin from a bin, that’s like an insight to ‘waynes world’ ^Umm kinda weak...didnt have anything to do wit ur rhyme^ kid don’t stress, I blame ya girl for them stretched rhymes cos them overweight stretch lines are bound to effect minds ^good punch only cuz his lines are stretched^ damn just drop the act bitch and pick up your reality you bout as much a ‘hot sauce’ as Williams was a casualty (*) ^Good comparison which makes it a good punch this verse will serve you with flows that ‘paste’ to impress & you beta hope its ‘spreadable’ so you can taste the success ^nice closer way to shut it down^ v/Premanition RTF |
Voted For: Premanition
Dope? Shit! you can quote that I ‘beg’ to differ..” Down on two like ya mother, but her legs were stiffer ^^forced multi as punch sucked Kid get a grip you couldn’t be sick if ya brains hurled Eatin from a bin, that’s like an insight to ‘waynes world’ ^^NO....... kid don’t stress, I blame ya girl for them stretched rhymes cos them overweight stretch lines are bound to effect minds ^^used strecthed lines too much...whack damn just drop the act bitch and pick up your reality you bout as much a ‘hot sauce’ as Williams was a casualty (*) ^^NO....whack this verse will serve you with flows that ‘paste’ to impress & you beta hope its ‘spreadable’ so you can taste the success ^^Um....ight?...... Man...ya had an ight structure and all...but the punches sucked.Had some good multis and all though some sounded forced.Get some wordplay and metaphors. I Bomb-Geeks with Strong-Speaks that'z bound to Hit prem Harder than Concrete, son your beyond-weak...// ^^What the hell? My "Led-Is-Wreckless" each Verse Dispersed Keepin son Dead-and-Breathless..Precision Incisions from "Head-to-Necklace" leave u "Ejectin-Breakfast"...// ok..check this... ^^focusing too much on flow... attack-with-a-force-above-average.. so when I pile-drive you from a mile-high you'll land-in-the-core-of-the-planet...// ^^trow a punch... I'm labeled-as-flagrant.. watch me discard-your-jaw-bitch with a martial-arts-kick when your face lays-on-the-pavement...// ^^^ZZZZZZZZZZZZ All of your lettering's-wasted on this veteran's-flagrance.. I'll superglue your lips and paste them to leprosy-patients...//(eww) ^^yOU NOT GONNA TROW a punch...are you? Mc nice when he writes? Nah...bout to get Slayed twice, I'm cold enuff 2 FREEZE HIS DOME -N- punch'm in the head just to "BREAK THE ICE"...// ^^shut up about yourself and diss him. Take his life and get RID-OF-THE-CORPSE, smack this PITIFUL-WHORE wit CRITICAL-FORCE, my 'delivery got this "Newbie Kid" hooked' like AMBILLICAL-CORDS...// ^^*sigh*...finnaly over OK.....terrible structure.Good flow.But you seemed to focus too much on it.You had no punches.NONe.ZERO.All those lines spoke about yourself or something.Work on dissing. Vote-Premanition LOL http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203166 |
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