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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

pen n paper spit with good flow n nice overall verse

marv came had personals and punches raped up...cool word play and dat dexter line was funny...

v/ marvjay

return vote on my jimmy pocketz battle
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This was feedback posted for Pen N' Paper
 

both seem to be throwback rhymes but u got this one

Voted For: MaRVJay1009



dis kid is a clown he think net rap is cool,should i slap dis fool?.
'pen n paper' wouldn't sale if he drop'd durin time 2 go 'back 2 school'
fam u gota lil rep on dis site but dont be proud of it fag.
u record tracks? nah u like "dexter's sister" u not "allowed in da lab".
i been back 4 nights...now u talkin like you nice.....where????
ya rap career like 'toy story' u wont have a 'buzz' 4 a few 'light years'.

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MaRVJay at first I was thinking u were good but that’s what I thought
Cuz ur verses are like Jaws Sequels u were biting but just not caught

Sorry PNP but this battle was pretty one sided.... ur comin with concepts but ur not landin punches or anythin.... u needa learn how to word ur shit better so it comes out as a punch..... ur flow and structure was beter but that doesnt matter in a battle all that much wen u come down to it.... Marv had consistently better punches and LMFAO at that Opener... once i saw ur opener i knew Pen was in for a rough battle, lol... this was some of the dopest ive seen Marv write in a while...

V/Marv

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