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Voted For: 4fil

eh easy onesided battle... 4fil had a overall better verse i thought he had better wordplay structure. and his punches were more complex.. overall nice job. work on your metas a lil more though you could get more crafty i think...
afropimp weak verse... i think you need to work on your structure and your punches.. go read old battles and elevate some more... overall one sided

Vote... 4FIL

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Voted For: 4fil

The dudes a royal ass hole.............. And he’s acting like he’s rich
Keeps his dog close to him Cause the closest he gets to a bitch
10 - 17 lines???............. This kids got newb written all over him
From when you clicked accept............ the battle was over then
He claims he's layal to the game what about to words he speaks?
cause giving me a good battle was a promise he failed to keep
Your living on thin ice.... so watch your step this battles heating up
I'd post a picture of your face.... but then the ice might crack up
I checked this kids dental records............ It says he got braces
Wait what’s this? The doctor also said that he found sperm traces
He flips beef like he flips the script… so I’ll cook him with ease
The Pimp’s styles tasty... Only Cause he works over at wendies
The Pimp’s Running away…. While his words are at a stand still
No wonder the kid flows well… his careers aimed down hill

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NOTHING.

V - 4fil.